|Reviews for Dragon Ball Z ARC: REWRITTEN|
| GhostFang GF chapter 11 . 4/24
If you make any more chapters then try this idea: when ever Frieza and Jaune touch each other indescribable pain shoots through their bodies.
| okami321 chapter 11 . 8/14/2019
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/9/2019
Pleas update I like this story
| Anon chapter 4 . 7/2/2019
You know what's funny I named my frezia race froze in xenoverse 2
| Rakkis3059 chapter 11 . 6/22/2019
Good luck. I love your Jaune stories.
| akeiser45 chapter 11 . 6/19/2019
Good Luck on Re-visioning dude!
| gunruner420 chapter 10 . 2/3/2019
Good story so far I vote for blake
| Greer123 chapter 10 . 1/18/2019
You are right the timeline has changed a lot.
| Inkaliber chapter 10 . 1/16/2019
The only thing Supreme Kai of Time would do by trying to fix it would cause an even further divergence in the time-branches (I know it’s usually lines, but I like to think of time like a never ending forest of trees, especially in my fanfics). I still hope Kale ends up being the pairing.
| Stephen6089 chapter 10 . 1/13/2019
| dragonmaycry12 chapter 10 . 1/13/2019
I think this is a possible pairing with Kale. It like Kuriza meeting Ruby all over again. Kale shyness and confidence issues like Ruby but Kuriza bring them out making her confidence to her self and asking out crush Kuriza and taking on Caulifla in the Tournament of power.
| dragonmaycry12 chapter 9 . 1/6/2019
Do both positive pairing. Goddesses of destruction Heles in up being lover and master to Kuriza after help and heal her.
They in up finding angel name Marcarita who Heles remember her and heal her wounds explain what happened to each other with Kuriza help heal their mind in falling for him. They him train be a god of destruction. Is Jaune first home is universe 2 or universe 7 or 11?
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/29/2018
Maybe not write the shit at all?
pure garbage is still garbage even with a new coat of paint