Reviews for Poisoned Paradise |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. Please make more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was amazing! I can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, wonder if the little kid thief will turn up again later. XD |
![]() ![]() Lol that was random but funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter was definitely better than the last chapter. hooe to see more for you soon. this Dragon's approval 9/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was pretty funny, which i didn't expect but im definitely not complaining |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this chapter and how you didn't write the whole childhood. Saved a lot of unnecessary reading (I don't like to read really really long chapters) Keep up the good work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want to see where this story goes plus I'm totally curious who her dad is |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is super interesting and captivating! i’m really excited to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems interesting, but I would have hoped to have little bit more happen in the first chapter. Otherwise really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Felt like you could have done more in this chapter. You need to hook your reader in with something, like starting off with exactly how she got in her situation. We see the parents and teachers side of the story, but not her's really. I do like her quirk and the idea you're trying to do. I do hope i see more of this. This Dragon's approval rae 6/10 |