|Reviews for KING DEDEDE HAZ A BETH DAY ON BOAT|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/20
“We’ll have flying cars in the future” they said
“we’ll have works of art in the future” they didnt said.
| Honestly chapter 1 . 2/19
joke stories like this are one of the few things I absolutely CANNOT stand on fanfiction. I know I shouldn't take this with a grain of salt, but come ON. If you write a joke story, write it right, because this is just fucking embarrassing.
All of you that reviewed previously shouldn't even do that. You're just encouraging them to mock this art, mock this site, mock Kirby. It's almost sickening. Don't write anymore, just for the sake of those that actually expect something worth a fuck.
Thank you, and good day.
| curlthebear01 chapter 1 . 2/13
I think this deserves a movie. And that movie deserves an Oscar. I give it 3/3 D's.
| THE ULTIMATE BROOM HATTER chapter 1 . 2/6
DIS IS TAH BURTS STUREEE EVUR DEADEDAE IS BEST CHEARTAR EVAR.
| Pipatyp chapter 1 . 1/27
A true masterpiece.
| KimiyounaKamira chapter 1 . 1/15
This... not gonna lie, some of the best spelling and grammar I've seen on this site so far. GOOD STORY
| Myths chapter 1 . 12/30/2017
Legit the best story I have ever read.
| kirbywarriors chapter 1 . 12/30/2017
Wtf did I just read? XD