Reviews for Colors |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! What happen next? Your prose and use of color to convey feeling have drawn me in completely. I look forward to more chapters. |
![]() ![]() Arrgghh! Cliffhanger! I love this story so much! So beautiful... |
![]() ![]() Finally, talking-rational, REAL talking. How long have they been married now, both of them polite and miserable? When he has "confessed" and she accepted, I do so hope you show us their return to London, to the polite, but pointed set-down of Julia (? his cousin's wife). I would so like for Julia to see "old" Elizabeth, the one before the grey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Egads! Put me out of my misery soon! What? What, Darcy? Spit it out, man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my... what a cliffhanger :o Love the slow burning, development of their relationship in this story. It's quiet but that just makes more deeply felt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooo, I hate cliffhangers... please update soon. Beautiful story |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAAT?you stopped? I want to hear what he has to say! I loved how their eyes met. All day long. Very nice. Hurry with the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh hard to imagine how little self esteem Elizabeth has. In spite of all the signs of Darcy's regard, she is still beset with doubts. Hope Darcy can at least set her on the path to recovery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will he tell her all? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! I'm dying for a new chapter! I come here everyday looking for it :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to wait until the end before commenting but I can't. The beginning was confusing and the writing atypical so I wasn't certain if I should continue. But, I did and slowly the story begins to make sense. She's profoundly depressed due to the circumstances with her father dying and then the results of a compromise. ( Please tell her story). The scene with the doctor was horrific and could have scarred her further. Keep writing! Seriously, its so different that its fascinating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very well done! I love how you weave in the colors with the circles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm getting worried. Please say that we will soon get an update. I'm really looking forward to see where we go next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad she's taking the first step. Someone has to. I wish D were a little more aggressive. It would improve their relations immensely. Thanks for writing. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so beautiful and moving. Thank you. |