Reviews for Colors
stendy chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
Oh no! What happen next?
Your prose and use of color to convey feeling have drawn me in completely. I look forward to more chapters.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
Arrgghh! Cliffhanger! I love this story so much! So beautiful...
NYT notsigned in chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
Finally, talking-rational, REAL talking. How long have they been married now, both of them polite and miserable? When he has "confessed" and she accepted, I do so hope you show us their return to London, to the polite, but pointed set-down of Julia (? his cousin's wife). I would so like for Julia to see "old" Elizabeth, the one before the grey.
LucilleRicardo chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
Egads! Put me out of my misery soon!
What? What, Darcy? Spit it out, man!
Elin Eriksen chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
Oh my... what a cliffhanger :o
Love the slow burning, development of their relationship in this story. It's quiet but that just makes more deeply felt.
7anastasia7 chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
Nooo, I hate cliffhangers... please update soon.
Beautiful story
Jansfamily4 chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
WHAAT?you stopped? I want to hear what he has to say! I loved how their eyes met. All day long. Very nice. Hurry with the next chapter!
EngLitLover chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
Gosh hard to imagine how little self esteem Elizabeth has. In spite of all the signs of Darcy's regard, she is still beset with doubts. Hope Darcy can at least set her on the path to recovery.
NotACursedChild chapter 10 . 1/17/2018
Will he tell her all?
amycoraline chapter 9 . 1/15/2018
Please update soon! I'm dying for a new chapter! I come here everyday looking for it :(
mangosmum chapter 9 . 1/15/2018
I wanted to wait until the end before commenting but I can't. The beginning was confusing and the writing atypical so I wasn't certain if I should continue. But, I did and slowly the story begins to make sense. She's profoundly depressed due to the circumstances with her father dying and then the results of a compromise. ( Please tell her story). The scene with the doctor was horrific and could have scarred her further. Keep writing! Seriously, its so different that its fascinating.
oldmoviewatcher chapter 9 . 1/14/2018
This is very well done! I love how you weave in the colors with the circles.
amamama chapter 9 . 1/13/2018
I'm getting worried. Please say that we will soon get an update. I'm really looking forward to see where we go next.
Dizzy Lizzy.60 chapter 5 . 1/12/2018
I'm glad she's taking the first step. Someone has to. I wish D were a little more aggressive. It would improve their relations immensely.
Thanks for writing. Cheers.
MorganAW chapter 9 . 1/12/2018
This was so beautiful and moving. Thank you.
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