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   Jansfamily4 chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 They are getting comfortable with each other. Warmth. Relaxed. And they made it together. I wonder how the boy is. Another beautiful chapter. |
| Imbravo chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 Yay an update! She falls asleep?! Of course she does. She's safe. She's in the "circle" of his arms. They saved the boy. Such a beautiful story. Aaaargh...another update please...soon! Thank you |
| intjdarcy chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 Such a sweet picture after all the turmoil, I hope they get better together. Your story is kinda like a 'blurry modern painting' lol, always to the point, leaving a lot to imagination. |
| pigtails913 chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 Okay, I'm chalking up her falling asleep to the exhaustion of the situation that led them to where they are, but ... huge breakthrough here, I hope! The little boy they saved *is* safe, right? |
| LucilleRicardo chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 I thought stopping where you did on chapter 8 was torture...but this is worse! This is killlling meeeeee! Really enjoying the story! |
| Irina-314 chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 The story is original and interesting. It is real new about Lizzy without her fire. But there is problems with some details. 1 London is blurry like a modern painting. Blurring is typical for painting of end of 19 century 2 What year is now (after Waterloo). Usual P&P is 1811-1812. How much time was from beginning of P&P? 3 After death of Mrs Bennet and lose respectavility after Lydia how Mr Darcy and Lizzy have compromise? Have you a story about it 4 The heir of earl have courtesy title. So usual Julia is Vicontess surname, but not Mrs Fitzwlliam. 5 The gentleman like Mr Darcy must have only white shirt, but he can have light blue vest. And it is most ptoper that he is in vest in scene with attic/ 6 Colonel was dead during the story but Lizzy did not noticed it. And Julia and Matlocl must be in mourning. |
| Lee3619 chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 Have I mentioned how much I adore this story? I really do. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. |
| Deanna27 chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 they are naked in each other's arms and he is kissing her and...she falls asleep! Arghhh! I am glad he feels she is in the first circle with him, perhaps his depression is lifting. |
| stendy chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 So excited to see another update! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 Beautiful! |
| debu chapter 9 . 1/10/2018 Bravo! Your story brings strong emotions with every new chapter. You are a most excellent author. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. |
| Jansfamily4 chapter 8 . 1/9/2018 Oh my gosh! How horrible. Well, they did think Elizabeth needs to help others and now she has everyone to help. I hope they will be safe. Maybe everyone else's trouble will help her snap out of this. Thank you. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/9/2018 Wow. Intense. Proud of Elizabeth. |
| Dizzy Lizzy.60 chapter 3 . 1/9/2018 How cruel. Shock treatment is horrible. The "cure" is worst that the disease. Love how D rescued her. I hope they can begin to help each other, make the most of it and, enjoy being man and wife. Cheers. |
| Dizzy Lizzy.60 chapter 2 . 1/9/2018 The col. is always so helpful. Love him. I hope d&e can heal by, helping each other. Wonder how G died. Cheers. |