This is an absolutely fantastic story and is so well written! Please continue on. I can’t wait to see how the characters progress.

That was intense, most intense scene I ever read, I'm speechless.. Phew man that was something..

Colonel always voice of reason, hmm only if Darcy takes Colonel's hidden advice, that Lizzy can improve by helping others and here none other than Darcy requires help, hopefully they will heal each other.

I was really surprised and that single statement by Lizzy where she agrees with Darcy, "Very True" it just left me speechless as if really light has gone off her life.

Interesting never read anything like this...

This story is amazing. It is sad, though has the sense of hope. I look forward to reading more. Thank you!

I particularly like the comparison of duties to flies, but you have such a way with words it's all breathtakingly wonderful. Kudos.

I don't have words to describe how much I'm enjoying this. You've given depression a description that someone not afflicted could perhaps understand a bit better. Perhaps someone will give a friend, spouse, child...a well needed hug or pat on the back or word of encouragement after reading your well-written story.

And oh, I want more info on how they ended up together! What happened to Jane? Where are the rest of the Bennets? Did Lydia elope sooner than in canon. Oh, so many questions! Thanks for sharing.

:-). So sweet, that she is now thinking of him instead of focusing solely on her own greys.

I was wondering where it would go after the first chapter, but today I'm hooked. It's quite beautiful, serene and angsty in a peaceful way. Please write again, and again, numerous stories, numerous beautiful escapades in a world of spleen and sensitivity.

Wow. I absolutely love the images in your story. Can't wait to read more!

Wow! This is powerfully done. I can barely wait to see where you take this. Thank you for sharing.

This is a beautiful story wonderfully told. I am still feeling the emotions of chapter 3 and felt my heart soar a little when she saw silver. I anxiously await the next color. Thanks so much for sharing this!

I am really enjoying this. So different. So fresh. It's a unique storytelling style, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow Just wow

Wow! This is amazing. And heart rending. I hope that this was not inspired by personal experience, but you have captured her “melancholy” so well... It’s funny - I once described a time in my life as the world faded to gray, except for one person shining out in color. And I clung to him like a drowning rat. Lol. And he got me through. So this is lovely. Thanks for sharing.