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![]() ![]() ![]() This is SUCH an emotional story. I am SO impressed with your writing. Bravo! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing story, such a poignant tale with a brilliant use of colours, well done. Hope you are still writing, all the best x |
![]() ![]() The way you describe the effects of depression are perfect. It gave me chills and made me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you are happy, you made me cry. Its such a beautiful and heartbreaking story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazing story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...just wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. One of my favourite story lines done with the most beautiful touch. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() Only complained ,It is short |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful so sad I cried all the way through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally found a way to reach the happiness in their marriage and it is just the beginning. Thank you very much for sharing your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are so nervous to be intimate without misunderstanding. He has to explain himself first and clear the air. Cherish the moments of their intimacy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A flood disaster draw them together now alone in a place both naked sharing a cover, warming up in front of a fire where their intimacy starts as a married couple. Exhaustion could not keep Elizabeth awake and they are alive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Disaster flood, death, an experience that may not be match again. Water everywhere and Elizabeth cannot swim. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cruel words of people even relations to Darcy. He did not hold his tongue to tell them so. He is there to protect his wife. Traveling in heavy rain not a good idea. |