Reviews for Down But Not Dead |
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![]() ![]() (Anon because at work) I'd like to think that because Obi-Wan has always been so content with the Force, he's unknowingly favored by the Force. He may not be the Chosen One but he's definitely special. What a good story! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() (Anon because at work) I thought this was a one-shot at first so I was surprised to see there were actually more chapters to this story. I like it so far but what I especially love is the ending scene before the story fades away. I can see everything in my head like an action movie and I think you've succeeded as a writer if the reader is able to visualize the story so well. You've definitely gotten Obi-Wan's dry humor down and Anakin's worries about his former Master is terrifyingly close to heart. "After all, Jedi are human, too" is a brilliant last sentence and I hope to read more of your story soon to see how it unfolds. |
![]() ![]() Now I'm intrigued! This was VERY good, you should definately consider writing a sequel! I want to see why Obi-Wan's midichlorian count rose! So many unanswered questions! |
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![]() ![]() Well written with a good team dynamic! Looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love it ! |