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Well done. Very well done!
Draco122

Nice one

Any more to this or will you write a second to finish it up?

I read this story again. And I still really enjoy it. Daphne romance.

it's so cringy and cheesy but I love it.

so our lovely author must be female because boys don't know that they're too childish, and they wonder why we'd prefer to date their brother who's a year or 2 older and normally he's cuter.

lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

a totally enjoyable story

So, I read the story. It wasn’t bad so please don’t take my criticism to heart. However, I admittedly was a bit disappointed. I’ve read similar stories as this yet they are full length (at least 20 chapters or more) and are more thought out. This seemed rushed as you were trying to cram a full-length fic into only 10 chapters. If this was strictly about the Yule Ball and Daphne as Harry’s date then 10 chapters would have been perfectly fine, however, as you included all the other stuff in there such as Harry gaining a Lordship then this fic did not do that plot line justice. Overall, it wasn’t bad but appeared to be rushed.

I love it!

Excellent story! Enjoyed your twist on Harry's fourth year. Loved how you brought Daphne to life and integrated her into Harry's life. Thought you did well by removing Ron and bringing Neville into the mix. Thought you did a great job with Daphne's parents and Astoria as well.

I do not think Amelia Bones or the Tonks family would be recognised by Harry at this point. Also, a ball for prominent families won't have the Tonks family invited to it. This looks like a plothole honestly...

Thank you for writing

I like the concept