Reviews for Side by Side |
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![]() ![]() Very powerful. I really enjoyed reading the first chapter. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful, heartbreaking start to this story. I’m so glad Kate and Johanna had the time to say goodbye and to Jo tell Kate she approved of Castle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This brought back the memories when my Mom passed from renal failure. It does make it easier, when you get to say "I love you" before they go. Johanna saw the love. Mothers know these things. |
![]() ![]() Glad this is continuing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great but sad beginning! Ready for the future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start. I'll be looking for your next update |
![]() ![]() Sad beginning, beautifully written. Looking forward to next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy, how quickly I went from "yay! Plane crash Caskett is back" to "I'm not crying, you're crying " Love the way you wrote about J's passing, it's a great balance of bringing out the emotion while not dragging it out. That last scene is just heartbreaking yet still hopefully because of the way she goes to him and he comforts her with such care. Really tugging at the heart strings with this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great, very sad beginning |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next chapter soon please. Like the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sad beginning but I'm glad Kate went to Rick for support. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sweet and sad way to start this story. As much as I'd have loved an 11th hour miracle transplant, Johanna's parting words make it better. Kate had so much more time with her mom than if she had died of her wounds. That fact makes the pain easier to endure. Looking forward to seeing Kate and Rick grow even closer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good writing. Poor Johanna. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved even with Johanna's soon passing she had something to say about her Daughter and Rick. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent beginning! Happy New Year! |