|Reviews for On Earth as it is in Hell|
| Marco LeonStrife chapter 8 . 12/21/2002
Very good chapter. I was kinda hoping for Zelnoa hintings, but alas, there were none. I look forward to reading more, and am thoroughly enjoying this series.
| Marco LeonStrife chapter 7 . 12/21/2002
Rinoa wears a blue hood. Hm.
This was a very good chapter. Poor elegant and immaculate Quists being subjected to public nudity...
| Marco LeonStrife chapter 6 . 12/21/2002
Short chapter, still well written. Interesting if you think about it, and how subtle changes could exist in the world. I truly hope the Tunnel Theory will be proven scientifically someday while I'm still alive...
| Marco LeonStrife chapter 5 . 12/21/2002
I like this story already. Its kind of everyone's dream you know...to be trapped in the Final Fantasy world...Especially the FF8 one...Fascinating...
| Marco LeonStrife chapter 4 . 12/21/2002
Hmmm...getting intriguing now. Quite good still.
| Marco LeonStrife chapter 3 . 12/21/2002
Very good. Amusing Cafeteria scene...um...should I compliment you on it?
This is very, very good though. Im already enjoying it, Im just wondering though...when are you going to insert Julia?
| Marco LeonStrife chapter 2 . 12/21/2002
::Sighs:: Come on Quistis, get the guts to tell Squall your true feelings!
LoL, Very well written, now on to chapter 3!
| Feral Strike chapter 16 . 12/21/2002
'Good job. You met a Sorceress and came off as an asshole'
That was a classic line _
Great chapter, the Zellphieness is, as always, exquisite, love the emotions and that little hint of darkness is beginning to break through...
Keep going, you're doing wonderfully
| tigerofthewind chapter 16 . 12/19/2002
Ugh...Seiftis. The dreaded pairing that has consumed all on . Oh, sorry, pointless rambling there...heh heh...
Anyway, despite this being 'written like a show on the WB', I liked this chapter. Once again, it's more insight to how the other characters interact with Scott, which was something that had been a bit lacking in earlier chapters. And the hat thing about Julian is kinda funny...hee, hats...
It makes me question things. For some reason, this Julian guy reminds me of Pegasus from Yu-Gi-Oh, minus the soul-stealing thing. Civil, painstakingly gentleman...you know, all the like. Still, if you keep putting off updates for a while, readers forget who people are. Myself, I had to go back to the first chapter just to pick up some of the names again!
Just a little minor note on that. In other words-update quickly! Before the onions find you!
Gotta jet. See ya!
| tigerofthewind chapter 15 . 12/19/2002
Well, a rather interesting end to this chapter, n'est pas? The truth is, while not being a huge ZellXSelphie fan, I did like the finishing touches to this. Somehow, the vaguely perverted humor made me envision the FF8 characters in a more human light. (Come on, you all KNOW that they've got to think like that sometime!)
Anyway, I love Zell. So we'll just leave it at that.*huggles Zell and dances away with him*
| LiquidSky chapter 16 . 12/17/2002
I was so pleasantly surprised to see that you updated so soon. I was wondering if you were going to put Seifer in this story, I'm glad you did as he is one of my favorite characters. Very nicely done, hope to see the next update soon.
| Yorun chapter 16 . 12/14/2002
It's a pleasure. ;)
however, I missed Zell in this chapter. Hell.. I miss Zell in every fic! :p
| LiquidSky chapter 15 . 12/9/2002
I'm glad you finally updated, thanks for letting me know. I really liked this chapter, I'm glad you didn't make Irvine a jerk just to break him up from Selphie. Great job I hope you'll update soon.
| tio too lazy to login chapter 15 . 12/9/2002
yeth, it is a lameass insult, i agree. But great job on this chapter, more, more, more and more pleaze
| Jee Simovia chapter 15 . 12/8/2002
Good chapter. That last scene did seem a little Out of character for both people, but heck, it works.