Are you dead?

Hey, are you dead?

If I were there I would have punched that guy, not even cause I know they guys back story, but because he’s stupid enough to provoke a human the transforms into a grim when angry, honestly

i might be conflating current ruby with volume 1 ruby again, but she really shouldn't need jaune to stand up for her

when ruby finds out that those people tried to kill two of her close friends, one of whom is also her teamate, she's going to be so pissed that she'll make fenrir look like a puppy

interesting that fenrir's strategy here against cardin would later be used by ruby agains harriet in volume 7

oh hey, guardians of gahoole reference

I'm really loving the development and build up both the stor6 and Fenrir's character especially when he has to settle with the conflict with both himself and the world around him. I hope to see more chapters in the future soon.

why the hell does HE have to apologize to her for defending him? Seriously, why is everyone so damn hypocritical in this fanfic?! arrrrghhh, everyone acts like Fenrir owes them something, when they just treat him like trash, put him in a damn boiler room, provoke him to attack them, make him apologize to velvet when he was the only one to help her, they acted as if he had done something wrong! And the worst is this bitch Goodbitch, really! Typical arrogant teacher who thinks he's always right and treats students like crap when they don't do exactly what she wants, for the love of god, they say he shouldn't be proud of killing hunters, but don't hunters always brag about killing grimm?! ?! Seriously, bloody fucking hypocrites, I hate these people, everyone rides Fenrir and fucks him like everything and Cardin comes out of it smelling like roses, then I just want to strangle these people!

I love Fenrir's development but damn do I really want to see him unleashing his real form. The red fang thing or whatever was cool but we do not know Fenrir's mind and no one knows except that bish. You are more creative than most authors just to let you know. Creating your own plot while sprinkling in canon to maintain that linear plot is so fucking well done. THIS is what fanfiction is all about! Not a goddamn text version of a show but inserted with some of that does not change the plot whatsoever.

black out the sky
fenrir will become very useful after the fall of beacon. it will be very interesting to see the contrast between the grimm, who believe that all things must die and want balance, and salem, who is immortal and wants destruction.

i'm working on catching up on this fic, but this chapter was the tipping point of wanting to voice my opinions. first of all, canon ruby is totally down to kill. we see this as early as volume 3 on the airship where she tries to kill neo and ensures roman's death. when she's recovering after the fall of beacon whe has murder in her eyes and voice when she says cinder's name, in volume 4 she cuts off tyrian's tail with zero hesitation, in volume 5 she tries to kill cinder with her silver eyes, in volume 6 she has no qualms with blake and yang killing adam, in volume 7 she tries to kill cinder with her silver eyes again, and in volume 8 she does it again and pushes neo into what she believed was a deadly fall. the only event that can really make ruby as you've written her be ok with taking those qctions early enough is penny's death. with that out of the way, the description you gave for an alpha really fits current ruby to a t, and i hope that that is recognized when/if you get o that point. i also really hope that ruby will act like current ruby, as i greatly prefer how she currently is characterized.

This is without a doubt the best RWBY fanfic I've ever read! I really hope come back to it soon

Fenrir! Make your goal to surpass them all!

Yang uses aura to help her strength. Fenrir does not. Poor boy don’t realize it yet.

Fenrir gives me mad Asura vibes