Reviews for The Lion, the Witch and the TARDIS
Eliza Donelittle chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
I was slightly confused at the beginning, thinking it was a crossover between Narnia and Harry Potter and then I realised it was a crossover between Narnia, Harry Potter and Doctor Who. Very clever to have the Doctor use Professor Lewis as his alias. I'm not sure he would be quite so respectful to Susan but it was a fun story and I enjoyed it.
ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 1/3/2018
Nice work! This is a neat idea, an interesting take on Susan and well written. I really liked the first paragraph.

I personally feel that “no mere Muggle” comes across as rather arrogant.

“While it appeared innocuous, it's power and energy were unprecedented.” “its”, I think.

Susan's interaction with the Professor is nicely done, particularly once they both realise that the other knows about Narnia.

"The End or... the Beginning" has a nice ambiguity, but with the epilogue, the story does feel complete. As it isn't marked as such, I wonder if it is?