Reviews for The Sorcerer's Stone: Alternate Year One
SortingHat chapter 5 . 9/11/2015
I think the author ran out of ideas at this point. Like my other review Hogwarts should have a personal development plan for Cabot even though he doesn't have any *disabilities* he does have an unique situation and he could be a day student hardly ever visiting his common room and go home at night via port key.

Heck if he is allowed to attend as a day student he might even be able to avoid the sorting all together.
SortingHat chapter 3 . 9/11/2015
Fine wands since 382BC? Yeah right! I'll believe that when I see it! That's before even the Saxons invaded Britain.

The whole diagonal ally is actually more representitive of the 1800s due to the wider store fronts and the style of windows.

Before the 1800s they didn't have huge glass like that.
SortingHat chapter 3 . 9/11/2015
I would get myself a computerized portable telescope rather then the lousy ones Hogwarts have so I could actually study the skies more professionally. Using a faraday cage I could work around the *magic* that blocks electronics.

However I seriously doubt that electronics malfunction due to magic. I think that's just there to discourage people from trying and if anything goes wrong it's because the wizard is incompetent on the device.
SortingHat chapter 2 . 9/11/2015
Actually an idea for *Cabot* in this fanfiction would be to attend Hogwarts as a *day* student without being sorted into a house at all. He may not be able to participate in school sports but he can still achieve is NEWTS and OWLS in order to graduate and come home at night by port key or floo power or he could be sorted but ever hardly go to the common room except to study or visit friends.

At night he would turn around and come home via port key or floo network.

Due to disabilities I had a modified learning plan so I didn't have to deal with so much of the stimulus of the big classrooms and had extra help should I needed it with a personal development plan that allows my schedule to be more unique you just need to speak up and be honest without stuttering and crap.

If Hogwarts were real they most likely would have a personal development plan or something for students with various disabilities.
reader1writer1 chapter 5 . 8/3/2015
I hope you get back to this one day. I'm truly enjoying it
reader1writer1 chapter 4 . 8/3/2015
I wonder if Tristan and Justin Finch-Fletchly will know each other? :)
reader1writer1 chapter 3 . 8/3/2015
Nice story. I'm enjoying it
Iryelb chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
I like this story and I to dislike it when authors try to be different and then end up telling exactly the same story, reminds me of a completely amazing story that does a fantastic job of being totally different from normal HP fics and it has some amazing plot twists (shameless plug s/9661560/1/) I would like to know however why you decided to change the Ravenclaw riddle system to a Gryffindore password system. Great story I look forward to whenever you post the next chapter.
gail19 chapter 5 . 9/5/2013
Extremely entertaining to read. Hope your muse brings you back this way someday.
gail19 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Snooty, but fun.
faye50free chapter 5 . 6/10/2013
This is a very good story, and your story line is very original. I do hope someday that you can bring yourself to finishing it.
Silver Heart11DOOM chapter 5 . 4/29/2013
love it plz update it plz
Aflibble chapter 5 . 8/10/2012
Are you still writing I noticed that the last story you updated was in 2006 I have really enjoyed reading this and was disappointed to find that it had not been updated in some time I would offer to adopt this but seem to not even be able to finsh my own stories. Hope you are still writing even if it is not fan fiction I agree with you that there are far to many stories that have a completely different Harry doing the same thing as the books
Marinelife37 chapter 5 . 7/23/2012
Great story. I love your characterizations. I am surprised the Tristan didn't come across anything that had the Boy-Who-Lived and You-Know-Who. I really hope you decide to continue and finish this story.
1711AdvenaAvis chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
Looking forward to seeing another update soon. XD
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