Reviews for Warts and all |
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![]() ![]() My ex-wife's nickname for me is 1942, so, yeah, I'm a bit old fashioned. I went to college in the early eighties, when you wore a tie and dress shoes to class, to look good. (reference movie "Purple Rain" for anything you need) Looking up this "Swampy" character? If my kid wanted THAT to be his look, I would drown him and bury him in the crawl space under the house. That's the dumbest hair I've EVER seen. Just plain nasty. Maybe I don't understand UK speak? But what is posh about this dirty, gross, "slow" looking, William Wallace as a child wannabe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() why does everyone ignore the fact that James Potter died trying to protect his wife and son. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful job. Love it. |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this, thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() This short story is so much better ats showing how helping each other can make the world a better place. The last three paragraphs summarize rather nicely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had to laugh at Crumblemaw, talk about mangling a name! But it would make a great codename to substitute for when you don't want some eavesdropping busybody to know who you really talking about. True, teh prophesy doesn't name the Dark Lord, and the "marked as an equal" doesn't have to be a physical mark. It could be a title, if as implied, Dumbledore was behind Harry Potter's reputation as boy who lived, that could be considered Dumbles marking Harry as his equal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marvelous! I love Petunia showing and dumping Harry in Severus' lap, giving him purpose to not become a bitter drunk like his father. I really like how integrated and accepting Petunia and Vernon became of magic. That they adopted squibs was wonderful. That Harry/Hal/Henry got to live a normal life is the best. That Dumbledore was locked up for criminal insanity was exquisite justice. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one was great too. I loved the Sevmione. Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love a happy ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. The best part was seeing the family that grew around Harry due to the Dursley's making a better choice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, change does not come overnight, but as long as it is supported by most and everybody do what they are supposed to do, then it will happen. Great AU story |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story |