Reviews for Two Cities
Fifty Shades Girl chapter 16 . 21m
I really like your story, hope to see more chapters soon
Dseiladmnd chapter 16 . 4/25
Great chapter. Glad your back. Can’t wait for more. Thank you.
dorisalynne2003 chapter 16 . 4/25
Oh dear. I don't think Nathan is gonna give up so easy! Can't wait for update!
mic476 chapter 16 . 4/25
Hopefully it's just a stomach bug and it won't last.
Now... I'm guessing that's Nathan at the door drunk .
Did Christian find out more about Nathan's family?

Glad u r back. Sorry about your computer
Post more soon.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/24
When are you going to put up a new chapter? It's killing me not knowing who was at the door!
aussieKayz chapter 16 . 4/24
Love the story and Madzie is soooo adorable
Misssee chapter 16 . 4/24
Christian wants to be there for his family. Ana needs help and he seems to be committed to be the man to help them. Good chapter
Guest chapter 16 . 4/23
O she should have dumped this dude ages ago just to protect her daughter. What's with Ana!?
Guest chapter 16 . 4/23
More pls and soon such a great story
JB chapter 16 . 4/22
Poor Madzie, it's so hard when your little one sick. Loved the scenes with Ana and Christian, they have such a connection. Guess who's knocking, this should be interesting. Thanks for sharing, look forward to more of the story. JB.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/22
Not fond of their kids name, it sounds like a car brand. Im driving a brand new Madzie.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/22
Seriously? Bring on more chapters!
carla.rbaptista chapter 16 . 4/24
Gostei muito do capítulo. Ansiosa para ler sobre o próximo capítulo.
kimberley.b.clark chapter 16 . 4/24
Can't wait for more.
goldenmom24 chapter 16 . 4/23
Welcome back. I love the new chapter.
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