|Reviews for a picaresque novel|
| softneji chapter 3 . 4/30/2020
man! i absolutely love this formatting of the story and this slow burn, straight up killer. i love it all tho. cant wait for more
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/23/2018
Bruh we need a Sasuke POV, so close to Hinata ever since college and supporting her in his silent and subtle ways. I ship it.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2018
Sasuhina being so casual comfortable and light is my headcanon so yassss
| Kiats10 chapter 1 . 7/10/2018
Love this! Please continue. I want to see how this story develops.
| LianCatMeow chapter 3 . 6/4/2018
Oh wow! Please continue this, I love how you slowly build up Sasuke and Hinata’s friendship. I want to read moreeee!
| Kichisaburo chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
Pls update this! I love it so much
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
Amazing chapter! Please update again really soon! You can write so well and it’s easy to get sucked right into the story! You know exactly how to convey one’s feelings! I could feel Hinata’s desperation and hurt emanating from the page! Can’t wait for the next one :)
| Thesunkunoichi chapter 3 . 2/2/2018
This is so beautiful and heartbreaking. I love it.
| sinedd662 chapter 3 . 2/1/2018
this story is .occ.
| guest chapter 3 . 2/1/2018
ah... I guess your first love isn't always your only love. I enjoy the flashbacks between the past and present... also I noticed this chapter has no flashbacks at all!
I think people move on and I like your depiction of it.
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/1/2018
Really Sakura? Does she have to ask again if Hinata is sure it's okay if she dates Naruto? Didn't Hinata already said yes? Does she have to rub it in again? Sakura should know better that you don't go out with a best friend's ex. She is so selfish. And she dare ti even call them best friend after what she is doing?
Looks like Naruto is all to willing to commit to Sakura. What an asshole. He has been dragging on Hinata and giving her false hopes all this time he went traveling. And now he going out with her best friend? He has no morals.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/1/2018
Friends my ass. Naruto don't want to commit to her. You can be friends with an ex after break up. Hinata should just say it. That Narutois a selfish ass and she don't want anything to do work for anymore.
| RikuDai chapter 2 . 1/16/2018
Oh maaaan I'm an ultimate sucker for office SasuHina daaamn please update! Btw, looking forward for ItaTema interaction hihihi
| sinedd662 chapter 2 . 1/13/2018
I like it, nicely written
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/13/2018
Make Sakura suffer! Make her hate life and her relationship with Naruto.