Reviews for A Change in Plans |
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![]() ![]() Have you never heard of a bloody spell checker? the apostrophe s in the first line should not be there. |
![]() ![]() You made me cry:) I don't even know because if joy or sadness...I really love this idea and I love how you have written it;)It made my day and I can't stop reading. Thanks for this wishes to Ella |
![]() ![]() THEYRE TOO CUTEEEEE! |
![]() ![]() I loved this but the site is not letting me read ch 5 |
![]() ![]() Didn't anyone - not even Minerva - tell the Head of Law Enforcement that Sirius was innocent, and his case needed to be reopened? It's like he stopped existing after Snape told the headmistress what the potter will revealed. |
![]() ![]() Sorry, something doesn't make sense. If the "Blood Feud" turns Weasley and Malfoy magic against each other, how is it that Draco and the Weasley twins manage to be on good terms? |
![]() ![]() Awesome you continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story! It's so interesting and different from some of the other severitus stories I've read. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, I love that you had George and Fred treat Harry normally. I was worried for a minute there. And the fact that they know he's a mini-maurader is hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I love that Severus is his godfather! The last paragraph made me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did enjoy the overall story. My favorite stories to read are Severitus stories with Drarry and it seems like that is where your series is headed. I liked Harry's friendship with Draco, the Malfoys, the 1st year Slytherins, and Severus. I am interested to see how you grow their relationships in future installments. The ending, and I'm sure you are not surprised to read this, was a complete letdown. I completely understand that you burned out of your story as an author, however, it would've been thoughtful to the readers who stuck by the story if you had just quickly wrapped up the final action scene and left what happens next open-ended for the sequel. As it is written, the ending was very unfair to the readers who took time out of their lives to read your story. Example: Snape casts the killing curse, and either misses or kills his target. The target misses Snape and flees (or dies) causing the specter of Voldemort to get away. Harry and Snape are okay but they and everyone else are shaken up, especially when Harry tells them about the Horcruxes. Sirius and Severus decide to have a tentative truce because they both want to protect Harry. Everyone vows to find a way to stop Voldemort for good. The story ends here. The sequel can deal with what happens next. This way, you can wrap up your story with the fight scene while also providing closure and giving the readers an idea of what they can expect next. Many readers are upset because there is no closure for this story, just a very abrupt ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story loving it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe that Draco forgot that the Potters' were murdered on Samhain. It would be obvious that the approaching date would cause Harry to withdraw into himself again. Draco should have either approached Severus again, or Owl Narcissa. Either one would have been able to explain to him the reason for a withdrawn and quiet Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. I wish there was no slash though. why can't they just be friends? why can't they be brothers? why does it always have to be the sexual relationship? that's not it's not the author's fault it's just that sometimes you just want to read a story without having relationships being all about sex. I know that technically it's not at that point yet but it will be at some point. all the interesting topics always have stupid slash in it. sometimes it's nice just to read a story without it being about romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() slash is far to prevalent in this community and it's really starting to annoy me |