Reviews for The Son of Alphard |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve been hoping so hard that the baby is not Blaise, and that Allura is not *that* Zabini. But there’s still hope for our time-crossed lovers, right? I mean, changing time is Roman’s job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another Chapter! Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO, i completely love your story (all your stories actually) and I REALLY hope you continue/finish it soon because I just can't wait to see how this ends. Please, please, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did not see that coming. Excellent, excellent writing, great reveal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, there's a reason time travel is illegal, it's to stop my head from hurting! :-) One of these days I'll draw myself out a character/time graph of Lian and Roman/Pollux through Dungeons and Tower and Alphard, except it might make my head hurt worse. Is that what you do, do you have a plot/character/time chart you work from?! Now that Lian is stuck back in Marauder time for a while, I hope she *does* transform at the boys, LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a little reassuring that the boys didn't figure out the Animagus transformation *all* on their own, the old book makes sense. Wait a minute, is Pollux an Animagus? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just came over from American in the Tower, and really enjoying Son of Alphard. Just. Well. Does Pollux' interior dialogue *ever* sound less than 20 years old? :-) Yes, I suppose growing up a Black does that to you by the time you're 11. Pollux is a little hard to like, not that he would ever admit out loud to caring. If Mary and Alice didn't like him, I certainly wouldn't! Love, love, love your Pandora. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok he's gotten himself into a pickle, now! Will he tell her *everything* , now? Awaiting your next chapter ... Your Constant Reader, Heidi R. |
![]() ![]() It started great but the introduction of Lian killed this story dead . She is the most Mary sue character I've ever seen. The story jumped the shark severely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow great story! I can't believe this has not more favs follows and reviews! Please continue this is honestly one of the best fanfiction i have ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thoughts on Allura... If she's Blaise's mother, Roman's a dead man (and probably Blaise's father). I hope she's Blaise's unmentioned aunt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter as always. but I can't help asking myself exactly to what extent does crow control Roman really? As much as I wanna ship him with Allura, how convenient for his image as a death eater that would make it gives me chills. The funny thing is I only started noticing this chapter thanks to Sirius's intervention and The mention of the death mark. Or is it my imagination? mmm |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sobs* omgoodness I just died! I love it. I really truly love it. please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have I ever said how much I love Roman? |