Good writing, nice story line, just don't all these references sarah has comparing Bryce to Chuck or I did this with Bryce or that. But not so much with Chuck which I don't like either. Or one night stands to scratch that itch, not needed, please

bravo
thanks so much

Awesome story. Throughly enjoyed it.

I love this story! I have just reread it again and this is one of the best story here, for me maybe even the primus inter pares! I hope that in future youw will write something more!

i love this everytime i read it. Just a grounded believable story. Love the chara is so strong in this story.

You'd think Sarah wouldn't trust Graham after he'd ordered her to work under Ryker on an unsanctioned mission to murder an innocent couple and their child. But, you'd be wrong. Well...not necessarily 'trust', but Sarah can count on Graham to order her keep killing people for Graham's 'Greater Good' to satisfy her bloodlust. 'Symbiotic' is probably a better word than 'trust'? Maybe 'codependency'?

Sarah kept killing people for Graham even after her hth with Gayle. It's like she couldn't stop herself...taking the next mission to kill that is. Fucking randos is later in the story...

This is the best answer Sarah can give to Chuck's question? JFC...
"C: So, the thing with Bryce is it ... over?
SSarah wanted to touch him but didnt dare.) Yes, I like to work alone now, and if our paths ever did cross again, then it would be strictly professional."

Sarah has a real gift for putting her Chuck at ease around Bryce *hard eyeroll *. And this was a private conversation with Chuck.

Chuck knew Bryce. Chuck knew that Sarah slept with randos at nightclubs. Chuck surely knew there would be a solid line between Sarah and Bryce on the org chart. The past is just that, but the shit still hurts.

I love this story so much. It's just sad Sarah feels the need to keep murdering people for Graham (and hide it from Chuck) because she's good at it, and even though she knows Graham is a lying, soulless, bag of dicks? She's afraid of him? Given her supposed talents, she could literally snuff Graham out in a heartbeat and no one would be the wiser, right?

I think Sarah should have told Chuck if he worked for the CIA that Sarah's lying, murderous, boss/mentor would probably have him killed eventually...and she would be the one tasked to murder him because that was her job. That would be helpful for Chuck to know.

I didn't warn you that Sarah tortured Chuck? Like I said...she likes to watch as she drains the life out of a target.

I think Sarah got off on doing the job up close. Not the blood. Just watching the life drain out of the eyes of her target(s) while she seduced them. She's Graham's slave Enforcer. She believes nothing but what Daddy Graham tells her to believe.

My goodness, I see why this is one of the most popular stories in the history of this community. Well done, that’s all I can say. I know it’s been a minute since you’ve been around, but just know that this story is truly special.

Love this thriller of a story. Thanks for sharing!

Reading Chapter 7, it makes so much sense how Carina takes shortcuts to finding Chuck, while Sarah essentially orders a dossier on him, and heads straight to Ellie to reach him. Loving this story so far.