Reviews for Freezing Point
SanSanna.67 chapter 3 . 10/13
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It was time to end this.

I'm too curious
Saberas-67 chapter 2 . 10/13
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I didn't have to give them any commands. We'd rehearsed this for long enough.

Come on...
Misanisonnis.92 chapter 3 . 10/13
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Articuno has begun to resist Metagross' psychic. She beat her wings powerfully, fighting his hold, sending Metagross plummeting down and up in time with the beating of her wings.

Boring -.-
ShumrumphX74 chapter 1 . 10/13
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No painting could have done her justice. Each tightly corded muscle brimmed with power. Her slightest motion was an act of seamless grace. I stood transfixed as she looked at me, her red eyes keen and as piercing as the icy wind.

What is that?
Sarra-6 chapter 3 . 10/13
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But I'd been expecting this.

Impossible.
Lrah.13 chapter 2 . 10/13
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He was right. I had worked for this for too long to make the mistake of an empty stomach.

this is gold...
ThmaberX94 chapter 2 . 10/13
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A pokewatcher's online account had directed me to Yakuto, this town known for its record low temperatures. She'd claimed to have seen the god in these very mountains. In her blog post she had included a hastily-drawn sketch, colored in with smudges of blue and silver. Last night, as I lay in bed, on the verge of uneasy sleep, her words had echoed in my mind:

Wow!
Onni25 chapter 2 . 10/13
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"Yes," one of them said. I was pretty sure his name was Vadim. He was scowling under his great beard.

Wow!
Lseirsei.64 chapter 3 . 10/13
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My hands were shaking so much that I almost couldn't hold the pokeball. And they shook as the pokeball shook, back and forth, like the frantic struggles of someone asphyxiating.

Nice!
Lnisnnis-77 chapter 2 . 10/13
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"Time to be off then," I said, amazed to find my voice steady. The door to the inn slammed shut behind us, its last breath of warmth stolen by the wind.

I'm too curious
Esonmon.83 chapter 1 . 10/13
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Even when the pokeball stopped moving and lay motionless on the snow, my hands still shook.

Come on...
MisaMisn 90 chapter 2 . 10/13
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I didn't have to give them any commands. We'd rehearsed this for long enough.

Nice!
SoSopha 9 chapter 2 . 10/13
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Finally, I remembered myself. In a practiced movement, I released three of my pokemon almost simultaneously – Lunatone, Metagross, and Magnezone.

Are u serious?!
AlinhtX16 chapter 1 . 10/13
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It took fifteen minutes before they pronounced me ready to go. I'd assembled my gear three days ago: the thermic layers, ice shoes, thick face mask. With all of it on I was sweltering inside the well-heated inn. I wore my pokeballs on a strap across my chest, easy to access when one moment's hesitation might be fatal.

Cool!
Eimph-28 chapter 1 . 10/13
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Later that night I woke suddenly, feeling chilled to the bone. It was dark in my room, too dark to be morning yet.

What is that?
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