Reviews for Pokemon: Jordinio Version! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good to know Ash will be an actual rival to the main character. Most SI get really bad when there's no one to keep up with the MC, but also suck when the MC is brought down to the level of every other pleb out there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed the story, I hope you continue to write. stay safe and ill see you on the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing love that place Pidgey evolved. Will u give them nicknames. Is pidgeotto naturally that big or is it just yours |
![]() ![]() cool post more plz |
![]() ![]() why is there a feebas in viridian forest? |
![]() ![]() cool stuff man |
![]() ![]() chansey yay |
![]() ![]() Rattata cool |
![]() ![]() cool stuff |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do know rattata doesn't learn any water attacks other than rain dance right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the omake and how he basically said fuck that Ash. I like the Traveler but that Ash honestly seems just a black wardrobe change away from being emo sometimes. I also really like the Pokémon roster you have going, it is very differnt than most fics have and that just makes it fun. As much as I love Lucario and Gardevour they pop up in every fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not necessarily I've read a story that says if a trainer manages to get their training license regardless of age they are legally considered adults. Like in naruto with the shinobi license |