Reviews for Pokemon: Jordinio Version!
Chrono Phoenix chapter 6 . 4/17/2020
Good to know Ash will be an actual rival to the main character. Most SI get really bad when there's no one to keep up with the MC, but also suck when the MC is brought down to the level of every other pleb out there.
Finder18 chapter 7 . 4/17/2020
really enjoyed the story, I hope you continue to write.
stay safe and ill see you on the next update!
Reptil chapter 7 . 4/16/2020
Amazing love that place Pidgey evolved. Will u give them nicknames. Is pidgeotto naturally that big or is it just yours
Guest chapter 7 . 4/15/2020
cool post more plz
Guest chapter 6 . 4/15/2020
why is there a feebas in viridian forest?
Guest chapter 5 . 4/15/2020
cool stuff man
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15/2020
chansey yay
Guest chapter 3 . 4/15/2020
Rattata cool
Guest chapter 2 . 4/15/2020
cool stuff
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2020
cool
RTNK chapter 7 . 4/15/2020
awesome chapter please update soon
RTNK chapter 6 . 4/15/2020
I love your story
Vraizel101 chapter 7 . 4/15/2020
You do know rattata doesn't learn any water attacks other than rain dance right.
kuriboh1233 chapter 7 . 4/15/2020
I liked the omake and how he basically said fuck that Ash. I like the Traveler but that Ash honestly seems just a black wardrobe change away from being emo sometimes.

I also really like the Pokémon roster you have going, it is very differnt than most fics have and that just makes it fun. As much as I love Lucario and Gardevour they pop up in every fic.
shinigamisama455 chapter 7 . 4/15/2020
Not necessarily I've read a story that says if a trainer manages to get their training license regardless of age they are legally considered adults. Like in naruto with the shinobi license
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