Oof. How is it you're having trouble spelling basic words? Trash.

sorry i will drop the story i can't stand the MC being a babysitter for Naruto

chapter 1 review:
- the quests feel forced
- it's like other stories, they try to make Naruto's life better.
- so much political correctness coming from the MC in a world of murder.
- honestly the rating should be T or K, i read only M to avoid the shonen theme..

Holy shit man…that was the best fucking ride Ive had it literal years reading a book…thanks for the ride man, seriouslythanks

Jesus I havent been invested in a naruto fanfic like this in a long ass time, its fighting for first place I’ll tell you what

Okay chapter 8 and I can confidently say this author…is goated with the sauce XDDD

For future reference, the flying thunder god technique doesn't take much chakra at all. It's a technique designed not to be chakra intensive due to Minato actively creating his own sealing languge. If Yami learned the technique in the same way as Minato, learning Minato's sealing linguistics, he would use little to no chakra at all thanks to his incredibly fast chakra recovery. Despite the distance between the user and the tag placed, there would be no issues or extra chakra used since chakra used for the jump is the same every time despite distance.

And surprisingly I got a status update around my tenth shot in;

You are now drunk. Good night!

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One tequila, Two tequila,
Three tequila, Floor!

You know, fusing Teaching, Writing, and the Skillbook ability should result in being able to make skill scrolls of anything known. This would make the ability not necessarily destroy useful resources.

One, dungeon creatures are presumably not "live" until brought out by Players. So no big.

Two, if the Pokemon Natural Dungeon's a real Naruto locale like Mount Myoboku then the Legendaries are real and revive the fallen like a Pokeball does Yami's captures. Once again, no big.

Seriously, summons are strange that way in Naruto to start with...

I would love to read your attempt on another world, preferably Harry Potter.

What a fucking sook

I must tell, I wasn't expecting that kind of ending, It was a good last twist

I loved the story right up until the ending it was kind of a bs cop out but I'm happy I got to experience the rest of this fun story

goated story