The ending of this really pissed me off I remember reading this when I first got into fanfiction and idk why you finished it like this but it honestly is infuriating if you ever feel like it you should come back and hop on the multiverse trend maybe make him go somewhere he'll get his ass kicked

Your story is great, just work on your grammar.

Wall Cock huh

He knows three uzumaki not two. Remember you did an insert of one in thr form of Rias.

You misspelled guard as gaurd/

You missed an opportunity here. Instead of saying magic is just “chakra but different” you could have said that magic is the manipulation of only mental energy. Given chakra is the combination of mental and physical energy.

Sooo…. The thing that annoys me most here is it makes ZERO sense to yell out the names of a jutsu. The only way it makes sense if you are saying it to alert your allies. The big thing for me though is if you are fighting one on one there is NO reason to scream your attack out loud. Its like yelling out spells in harry potter. If you can do it wordlessly you SHOULD.

Honestly superman, batman, and wonderwoman wouldn’t instantly be “friends” after that fight. They might be allies at that point true. But not friends.

It isn’t aquaracy is accuracy

Its Might Gai

I don’t believe the ninja world is that sexist. We have seen great kunoichi and besides having chakra means female vs male isn’t that big of a difference

Remember Tsunade? It’s weird to suddenly have a super sexist version. Ninjas don’t give a f your gender they just need you to go and kill people. And seduction missions would need more female ninjas obviously

Hiruzen’s whole decree regarding Naruto was so dumb and so are the villagers who are blind morons

Ah well. New adventure now

Really he should have grinder his stats more

Idk why he didn’t pick the stat point gains at least the second time

Random item versus 5 stats? No brainer

Lol well fighting Pokémon is kind of…I’d rather it be orcs or goblins from traditional fantasy stuff

I really hate how people keep thinking that Gai can’t use ninjutsu. Nowhere does it say that. He just prefers taijutsu but he’s a frickin jonin after all. And why use half of the Japanese name and the English romanized name? Consistency would be nice