| Reviews for Yami: The Gamer Kage |
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   Douggernaut chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Excellent chapter as always! |
| bigbee702 chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Love the story. Will you give the MC a unique bloodline limit. Call me weird but I wish to see romance with somebody from or another village like Samui (or somebody older like Kurenai or Anko). I hate KurenaiXAsuma pairing. |
| Omni-Creator Kami of Anime chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 An SI-OC Gamer fanfic? One of the best types of fanfics there is. Quick question, though: why make him a civilian? Why not make him a member of a clan like the Hyuuga or better yet the Uchiha? All the best ninja typically come from Clans, and the best also usually have Kekkei Genkai. Plus with all the OP villains in the future, along with the fact that Yami doesn’t have the benefit of being a Jinchuruki, Yami will need an edge. Unless, of course, Yami is of clan background who was orphaned from the Kyuubi attack? You did mention Yami resembled the Uchiha, so maybe Yami is actually an Uchiha. Please update soon! |
| merendinoemiliano chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Nice story, this could be interesting. I just hope the main charachter won't be too op or have a dumb massharem. Keep up the good work and see you later, also good year. |
| The Lion's Pride chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Good Start.. |
| infadinityfollower chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 In all honesty this is so generic that is hard to read. No spin. No class. Just a basic set up... which I guess is fine. Maybe? |
| FateBurn chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Good start. |
| theuglychild chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Yaaay...cant wait to see how this plays out! |
| Zinnyzin chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Interesting start! Mixing in several different video game elements and making it possible that, once he 'beats' the game, he can continue in a new story. Your writing style has improved, as well, so bonus for that. Overall, 9.5/10. Naruto is a bit overused but you rarely see an OC/SI in a good gamer story. |
| lordofmars97 chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Cool story man hope to see a new a chapter soon |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Really man another one? I mean I know its gonna be good. But I'm still reeling in my seat waiting for PJO the game. Don't over work yourself my man. You make great works of art, but it seems like you try to over do things a bit. But I can't complain, Atleast I get to read some more good stories. |