|Reviews for Aniki|
| J chapter 14 . 3/23
You... I went to your profile and read this: "Everything is dead except Making Choices. So please be patient. I am a major procrastinator at heart." (Oh, and I took a peek at your Deviantart account. Cool.) YOU CANNOT BE SERIOUS! Oh, you wouldn't be worrying about tomatoes and pianos flying at you... I'll be sure to hurl anything within my reach if I see you (and what is currently beside me is a 3 story house- which I am fairly sure I'll be able to hurl at you in this reality). AND, FOR THE HECK OF IT, YOU UPDATED YOUR ACCOUNT LAST NOVEMBER 2008, AND YOUR LAST STORY UPDATE WAS ON OCTOBER 2008! YOUR LAST UPDATE OF THIS STORY WAS ON SEPTEMBER 2005! I QUOTE FROM A STORY I READ THE FEELINGS I WISH TO CONVEY: "HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT IF I TURNED YOU ON AND LEFT?" FOR THE LOVE OF LIFE AND ALL THAT IS SWEET LIKE CHOCOLATE AND CANDY, PLEASE UPDATE!
| EikaRose chapter 13 . 3/21
Why spirit of fire screeching?
| wittyusernames chapter 13 . 11/7/2014
AHHHHHHHH please update I know its been. well nine years, but I believe in you!
| mew mew 124 chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Oh man! I luv this story, it is so fun and touching.
I like how this story shows a possibility that could've happened if Yoh and Hao grew up.
Just wanted 2 say, really like this story...and thanx 4 making it!
| MonkHerrick chapter 14 . 6/1/2014
I don't mean to be rude but do you plan on updating this story or not?
| Criticizer chapter 3 . 5/11/2014
Your plot isn't all that bad, but I do recommend not putting Japanese words into the story, whether you are Japanese or not- mostly because the majority of the readers will be English, and having to scroll down all the way to the translations would be very irritating for people who do not know Japanese.
Also, why would you put Japanese words into your writing if you're just going to put the translations at the bottom? Why not just save some time and space by writing in English in the beginning?
This is just my opinion, so please do not take offense. I would appreciate it, however, if you took some of this into consideration.
| majishan chapter 14 . 1/27/2014
i'm looking foward how yoh will react when he discovers hao is his brother
| lilpopsplash chapter 14 . 12/14/2013
Noooooo. This is actually pretty good! I'm really into this story so plz update soon!
| Hao Asakura chapter 14 . 11/14/2013
when r u going to make a new chapter? this is the best story ive read so far aww I love it I cant wait what happens next? pls continue the story great job 10/10 ! oh and email me when ur about to upgrade:
| Amaya Ishimoto chapter 14 . 8/19/2013
Great story! Can't wait til your next update! By the way, is it me or are Spirit of Fire and Fyra-chan the same or related? I mean, the way you wrote about SOF kind of reminded me of Fyra-chan in some way :) But I really liked the Fyra-chan part! That was so awesome! :D Keep up the good work!
| squirtlepokemon215 chapter 14 . 5/15/2013
| justhappy8 chapter 14 . 3/10/2013
AHHHHH this story is amazing and I'm so curious to know what happens! I really really really hope you update this sometime soon:(
| Starlit Skyline chapter 14 . 2/18/2013
This is an AWESOME story!
I'm just sad that you dropped it, sighs, ah well I can't do anything about that.
Thank you for writing this and I wish you luck in everything you desire to achieve.
| Fragments of Imagination chapter 14 . 1/26/2013
I really want to read the next chapter, this story is great . I hope the next chapter will be out soon, I'm really curious now.
| Yuki-Onna1 chapter 14 . 1/13/2013
It's been more than a year! *Throws bed at Shiroi-Ai.*