Reviews for A Good Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the good read! Honestly pretty great writing, I was engaged the whole time. That being said the ending did feel rushed and didn't feel very cathartic considering the long long era of intense stress we had LOL, could have been ended out better in terms of emotional fulfillment! Overall though I really enjoyed myself, I'm glad I found this fid. Thanks for writing (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would prefer HermioneSirius instead of Regulus... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dont leave horrid reviews as I think it unkind to a person who has spent time sharing their creativity. I think this is the first I have left that is negative... I am absolutely disgusted and if I had know this would be here at chapter 40 of 48 I would have NEVER read this fiction. I understand and accepted that she could have got with the wrong brother and then found the right one. But you can't claim to love someone and do that! She clearly doesn't love or care about Reg otherwise she would have contacted him or found some other way to check. There are loads of ways she could have checked, instead she checks and has sex with sirus who then right after gives her to his brother and saying he doesn't deserve her. ARE YOU KIDDING ME! Reg doesn't deserve to have a slag and an arsehole for an ex or brother, he is the one who deserves better. I am absolutely furious. Those two are so F****** selfish and self absorbed they deserve each other. And sirus is an actual creep and a brat dont what she sees in him. I think the reason why I'm so angry is that I am so disappointed, this story is really well written and was shaping up to be a favourite but after this I cant read anymore. The worst part is that sirus is so well written that he definitely seems in character along with so many others and up till this point so did hermione with only a touch of OOC. Hermiones character has a strong moral compass and yet she has done a 180. And before u say she has been through a lot she had in the books and still kept her head straight. I am so angry, u are clearly talented as I wouldnt be this affected if I hadn't be so invested with ur story. I am almost as angry and upset as I was when Fred and Snape died in the books! Why did you have that scene in there? What does it accomplish towards the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great read! I haven't dived much into Reg/Hermione, but I enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel so bad for Hermione, Sirius, and Regulus. The love triangle they have going on makes my head spin. Both Sirius and Regulus broke up with Hermione because their messed up family, and now she stuck between a rock and a hard place. Sirius now wants her back, and Regulus still loves her but doesn't get back with her because he is a Deatheater. I love the Black brothers and Hermione, but she really shouldn't have gotten with Regulus after Sirius. That's kind of breaking an unsaid rule. Otherwise, I love a good drama! LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Considering Marley and Sirius aren't together anymore. Why is Sirius still making it known to remember the small things like Marleys birthday? Doesn't he realize that Hermione might feel inadequate or uncomfortable with the fact that he's a little to close to her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story but Sirius calling her kitten is so cringe I’m so sorry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi :) I know, this is an older fic. Beautiful work, love it! Damon said, please you should give credit where credit is due ;) |
![]() ![]() I love this story. I do not like this chapter, oh Hermione. |
![]() ![]() The part where Hermione and Regulus FINALLY got together seemed...rushed. It felt like they needed to have rehashed and permanently settled everything between them first, but other than that, EXCELLENT story! |
![]() ![]() I'd wondered how the Sirius/Hermione duo would break up w/o making either one of them look like the bad guy and that was a good way to do it. |
![]() ![]() Is Hermione really dumb/naive enough to believe that Albus is even bothering to look for a way to send her back to her own time? Of course he isn't. He can't control minions long-time-distance, now can he? She's too valuable a tool to let escape. |
![]() ![]() I love how you've brought Aberforth into the story! He's a dreadfully under-used character. (One arrives "AT" their destination, not "to".) |
![]() ![]() I feel sorry for Crookshanks in stories like this. I mean, he'sabandoned without a second thought, like Hedwig is in Harry time-travel stories. |