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daianapotter chapter 3 . 12/19/2019
Me ha encantado ha sido tan dulce :) me encantan tus historias n.n
KookiePie1025 chapter 3 . 12/16/2019
Goodness! This story pulled at my heartstrings...anticipating how it’ll end! But goodness it was so good! Got my happy ending!
daianapotter chapter 2 . 6/29/2019
Me ha encanto que hayas echo el fic desde la perspectiva de ichigo. Y si, él conocía a sora y podemos decir que murió para poder darle una vida mejor a hime.
daianapotter chapter 1 . 6/28/2019
Interesante concepto.

La hime pequeña me pareció re tierna la adore n.n y como iba todos los días y le entregaba algo xd y como le llama scowl san xd me gusto las apariciones de sora. Y era ichigo el amigo? Me pregunto que habrá pasado para que se quedara vinculado al árbol.

Me encanto y ame como la protegio de ese que queria matarla.

Se me hizo super tierno cuando ella quería que él la tocara n.n tatsuki como siempre protegiendo a la princesa.

Me encanto como fue corriendo a él cuando se entero de lo del fuego y como por fin pudo abrazarla
Hilia chapter 3 . 3/25/2019
I want more! Hehe
jylener22 chapter 3 . 1/23/2019
Ahh...I can sigh in relief. That was a really good ending.

I LOVED Orihime berating Ichigo for the overprotective, understandably greedy idiot that he is, but I also really enjoyed how you brought that particular line back around to bring things full circle. What I wouldn't give to find out what part of this story your imagination came up with first: the opening where they meet or the ending where they find each other again. For me, it's always the ending and then my problem becomes planning out my 'route' so that I end up where I wanted to be.

This was a fun, light-hearted and adorable read. Definitely going to be checking out more of your work, sweetheart. :)
jylener22 chapter 2 . 1/23/2019
I LOVE that the next part was Ichigo's perspective on the whole thing.

This will be a bit shorter, but I can't wait to see how you wrapped this all up, because OBVIOUSLY this story is moving towards a more happy ending. You don't seem like the kind of person to pull the rug out from under us...but I have made mistakes before, so we'll have to read and see. :)
jylener22 chapter 1 . 1/23/2019
Had to go and read your inspiration material and I'm so glad I did. Really bittersweet story and definitely helped to get a feel for where you might be going with this.

Honestly would have been fine if you stopped here with this chapter, but on the other hand, I'm REALLY happy you chose to extend the story in your own way. Excited to see what comes next.

Probably my favorite scene was when Orihime comes to Ichigo after her brother dies. I don't typically cry and while I didn't get to that point here, I'd be lying if I said I didn't get a little misty eyed. Really well written. I could FEEL the emotions you were going for.

boho chapter 3 . 11/28/2018
So what happened that he was there and others were able to see him finally. I am very confused as where did he come from after his tree died. And they are both lovey dovey all of a sudden like nothing happened. Explanation needed here. For me at least.
boho chapter 2 . 11/28/2018
Ichigosa pov! Of course! Beautiful story. Thank you.

Still wonder what is chapter 3 about.
boho chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
I dont really understand. Ichigo cant touch Orihime but once they hugged each other. And then he was able to touch her at the end.
And then he was able to take that red ribbon and eat her food and then there was other brown haired guy who could consume her. I really know nothing much about the story which inspired you to write this but feel i should read it so things would be more clear to me.
Anyway the story was beautiful and i enjoyed it. Esepcially the ending that Ichigo "i love you so fucking much"

One shot story so I wonder what chapters 2 and 3 are for.
Sele de la Luna chapter 3 . 11/2/2018
Awesome, beautifully written. I Loved it.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/21/2018
mryann chapter 3 . 10/19/2018
ohhh the long wait is really satisfying.. i love it..
mryann chapter 2 . 10/19/2018
i really really love this story.. the emotion everything.. its just beautiful..
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