Huh. That is rather unusual to have a newly married harry in an avengers fic. I like the idea though, and having a magic US.

This is really, really good, and has a lot of potential. Loved the fact that you called the Wizarding counterpart to the Pentagon, the Pentagram.

I sincerely hope that S.H.I.E.L.D., and by extension Fury, are caught COMPLETELY off guard by the appearance of an entire SOCIETY that has apparently been all over the world for centuries; none of those "well, we at S.H.I.E.L.D. just /happened/ to have a file on you guys" or a "we're in contact with our magical counterparts" cliches that are somewhat common in HP/Avengers crossovers. I want to see how Fury responds to a total unknown.

Curious to see if the nuke is going to come into play in this story; as much as I would love to see everyone's reactions to Harry simply Vanishing a nuclear bomb, it's probably necessary in order to cripple the Chitauri fleet in a way that simply closing the portal couldn't do.

Surprised that Hulk didn't have a cameo in this chapter; even Thor got a line.

Loved the fact that you brought back Cap knowing about Wizard of Oz; believe it or not, it's those small details that helped tie this story into the original movie all the more for me.

Kind of sad this isn't a Harem story (who wouldn't want to knock boots with some of the MCU ladies?), but since you mentioned that you wrote a few Harem stories before, I'm going to check out your profile after this to see if any catch my attention.

Anyway, if the quality of this opening chapter is any indication, we're in for a real treat going forward. Hope you update soonish!

I saw that Burn Notice reference. Season 1 Episode 4 right? Some situations just come down to probabilities. The chance that an assassin can hit you from 50 yards with a handgun. How many shots he can get off. Might have a 1/5 chance of taking a bullet, maybe a 1/10 chance of dying. Or maybe a 100% of getting blown away by a shotgun wired to a door.

A well written piece.
Even with the flash backs it flowed together well and I enjoyed reading it.
I look forward to reading more.

Brilliant. Keep up!

This story is fantastic. I am enjoying it but I have some reservations about two things.

Ginny is annoying as a love-interest in any story but you managed to make her less annoying in your story. Still, you could have picked anyone else to be Harry's mate such as Hermione, Luna, Daphne, Susan or some less well known girls...but did it have to be Ginny?

Ginny looks like his mother and unless he has a thing for incest, he shouldn't be dating her, period. The only reasonable explanation for "monster in his chest" is love-potions. Ron probably also dosed Hermione with love-potions considering that he practically bullied her in first year and no self-respecting woman would ever date someone like that.

The second thing I was annoyed with is the way Loki assumes that Earth wizards are naturally weak. You're talking about humans who have the ability to manipulate and bend reality on a small scale...on a whim. They were as powerful 600 years ago as they are today. Earth Wizards are far more powerful than Asgardian who wield magic.

Yes, I know Loki is physically stronger due to his alien heritage, but Harry is a wizard from a society who have been wielding magic in all branches for a very long time and are essentially reality bending/warping magical beings on a small scale. The Asgardians have proclivity towards only one branch of magic: magical runes and even then, are limited in scope to the full capabilities of magic.

That means that Loki didn't stand a chance against Harry, even without the Elder Wand to back him up. There is literally an unlimited ways to deal with Loki. Turn his clothes into a Portkey that whisks him into an active volcano, turn him into a rock, turn all the blood in Loki's body into mud, even use a simple first year spell like the switching spell to kill him easily. The switching spell can be used in such a way as to "switch" Loki's heart with a rock so that he no longer has a heart but has a rock in the cavity where his heart used to be housed in, meaning he'd be dead in seconds, superior inhuman strength aside.

There's literally no limit to the magic that can be wrought if you don't limit your imagination to what you can do with it. You have sort of nerfed Earth Wizards in this story.

Can you say badass!

I loved the story but why Ginny she is the worst to have Harry pair with. Even the Author her self said that she should have paired him with someone else. Personally I would used Luna, maybe of the Patil Twins, or the rarely used Slytherin ladies Davis or Greengrass as Harry wife.

Very promising start.

Nice to see the zombie-dragon-turtle allowing them to get in on the action.

Mental pollution from the Hallows? This is gonna be good.

Interesting start, though Ginny is a bit of a sore point for me. Let's see how it goes.

Interesting start. I'll follow for now and see where this goes.

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Nice story
Please update

Are you going to continue this story. I enjoy it so far.