|Reviews for A More Realistic Hope|
| Isaasol2 chapter 3 . 8/20
How are you going to save Junko? She's more of an ideology than she's a character. And I do mean that literally, keep in mind that I do love Junko, but she's not really a character, but more of a plot device, like she doesn't come across as an actual person.
The problem with trying to save or redeem Junko -other than what I already stated- we were never given vivid detail or the specific events of Junko's childhood that gave her her love for Despair. Sure, Junko claims it's to fight boredom as Despair is the only thing she can't predict, but I feel if that were actually true, not only would she be Yandere for Makato, as she can't predict him, but the fact she can predict happiness or sadness and yet she can't predict despair? It's not that Despair is unpredictable to her, it's some mental illness she sufferers from that allows Despair to be the only thing she can feel, and it comes across as pleasure rather than suffering. Another problem is, we have no clear idea of what Junko's mental illness is. So, my point is, with alot of the stuff I pointed out being unclear, how would Makato be able to help Junko?
| cungus chapter 22 . 12/4/2022
well thanks, this was pretty sweet :)
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/6/2021
This is good and interesting story
| RandomGuest chapter 1 . 3/21/2021
Well, Naegi is actually average in nearly everything but misfortune and good fortune and intellect... and motivation to do the right thing. And hope.
| Mr. Haziq chapter 22 . 3/19/2021
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/14/2021
Dude the parts with Makoto and Monaca were the best parts, he was like a father to her. If he asked the Ultimate Yakuza, then I’m sure the dude could actually pull some strings and make it so he actually was.
It would be nice to see more of other people’s reactions to how Makoto and Monaca interact with one another as well as how those people effect the two.
Like Souda, Miu, and K1-B0 build a little prototype kind of endoskeleton that takes all three of them to control (nothing is perfect). One person per leg while the remain individual monitors her spine and makes adjustments to prevent any further injury. They barrow and surprise Monaca with it before they go on to surprise Makoto, who is likely looking around frantically for her because one moment things are okay and the next moment he’s laying on his back trying to remember how to breathe after being sent out a window (he limps away with a cracked rib and dislocated shoulder, he’s luck that it isn’t anything worse).
I’m rambling, but if you’re interested in hearing more ideas then email maybe?
| XDXDD chapter 2 . 2/8/2021
i know its late, but i really hope jt would be a non despair fic, since Monaca and Naegi's interaction is too wholesome
| doomqwer chapter 22 . 1/23/2021
a pity i quite enjoyed this story well its good to know will at least continue writing
| Princess Crystal Karma chapter 22 . 1/23/2021
if you ever need help understanding the tags on Ao3 let me know! I'll be happy to give you pointers :)
I'm super excited for the rewrite!
| hoodinilegion chapter 2 . 12/13/2020
please. make that Junko and Makoto AU!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2020
Ok, first, I want to tell that I really love to read all your stories again. You have a lot of talent.
Second, I don't know if you have a tumblr or deviantart or something, but I hope you're okay though the current situation. (Sorry, I don't speak English very well, so maybe there's something wrong)
| Toaru Lover chapter 21 . 5/11/2020
It's awesome please update
| setokayba2n chapter 21 . 2/11/2020
The story become a little monotone after a while, not to say the story is bad, but for me is repetitive and almost the same in chapters...
| Mr. Haziq chapter 20 . 1/3/2020
Wow. Byakuya's sister. What's the reason she's a cyborg in this world?
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/1/2020
Thanks for the update, and happy new year!