Reviews for A More Realistic Hope
Reapergenesis32 chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
I think this should be a mixed AU, depending on which direction you want to go in. Like Junko is still obsessed with despair but Naegi or the kids (if they are adopted as well later) somehow counter-acts her actions inadvertently and creates a non-despair AU which will lead her to take more drastic measures and slowly become obsessed with her 'rival' who doesn't realize what's going on. This could open more plot lines, but only if you're comfortable with them. If not, then I'm always up for a Non-Despair AU, because these character's deserve it.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Great story definitely caught my attention can't wait to See what happens next for the pairing I like a Naegi Harem but if it has to be single I like the of a Naegi x Harukawa.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Non-Despair AU, Please?
Guest chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Naegi got himself an instant little sister and maid...who would have thought...this is great, keep up the good work
D'Lo Bro chapter 2 . 1/17/2018
Hoping Monaca will make a recovery, and Kirumi is going to work for Makoto's family? Nice. Also please make it a Non-Despair AU.
1995hzq chapter 2 . 1/17/2018
Poor Monaca, is she really wheelchair bound or will she get better? Please make this a Non-Despair AU.
wesst1 chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Honestly, if Naegi is going to look after Monaca maybe he should be with Owari, who is in a similar situation with her siblings (being their sole caregiver). I mean I like the harem idea too, they all see Makoto as great husband and father material, but I'd like to see a NaegixOwari main pairing at least once. Plus you have a way to get then to meet early or spend a lot of time together if Nekomaru tries to help Monaca, Owari is training with him, even if it is kind of unoffical (they're really just classmates not coach and athlete even if to Nekomaru anyone can be one of his athletes and a member of his team). As for despair or non-despair, this feels like a non-despair AU, I'd say keep it that way, Junko is resourceful but without Monaca to make Monokuma I don't think she could get far, but that's a personal opinion. The other reviewers have a good idea about Junko meeting Naegi early and becoming obsessed with his unpredictability. Anyway keep up the good work.
lolrus555 chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
NO. NAEGI SHOULD NOT SAVE JUNKO. SHE IS AN EVIL AND IRREDEEMABLE FUCKING BITCH! Please, I implore you with every fibre of my being, do not listen to anyone who tells you that Naegi should be able to save and redeem Junko. Just look at all of the shit she caused in the Hope's Peak saga. Practically every once of misery that happened in those games can be traced back to her. She was completely conscious and aware of her monsterous actions, and that's fucking irredeemable. So once again, please, PLEASE, do not make this another story where Naegi 'saves' the most vile and evil character in visual novel history.

Really cool story BTW. I like it a lot. I also really hope Naegi still wears his hoodie instead of HPA uniform when he ends up there. That uniform just leaves a bad taste in my mouth
doomqwer chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Hmmm well for the junko part it's stated that a big part of her throwing the world into despair was out of pure unadulterated boredom as she can predict almost any outcome because of her ultimate analyst abilities but it's also said that she can't predict naegi so if you could get her to meet naegi and unpredictable boy before she finds despair she would have something or someone different to obsess over though that would have a naegi obsessed junko stalking him
dfriel1996 chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Another amazing chapter to bad it took Monaca being put into a wheelchair for her to get away from her abusive family, but now she can be happy with Makoto and having a loving family. Also love the idea of Kirumi being the Naegi family maid can't wait for the next chapter keep up with all the amazing work. For the pairing I honestly like the idea of a Makoto x Harem.
1995hzq chapter 1 . 1/16/2018
So this story is about Makoto bonding with Monaca, pretty interesting. With Makoto's early influence, Monaca won't be swayed by Junko and thus preventing the manufacturing of Monokuma's by the Towa group right?
Akira44 chapter 2 . 1/17/2018
Lovely... rather than make Junko obsessed with despair how about if you make Junko obsessed with Makoto.. really love plot twist like that.. and for the pairing,, if I can choose I want Makoto with Junko or with Mikan Tsumiki..
can't wait for the next one.. keep spirit and please update..
Vongola Ninja chapter 2 . 1/17/2018
honestly hoping you have Nekomaru find a way to give monaka physical therapy so she can walk again as for the despair question I think you should have it cut down the middle, Junko's still obsessed but it's twisted into something like she believes that the moment she kills Makoto no form of despair will ever be able to give her that level of pleasure and wholeness again followed soon by her killing herself, meaning she would develop a new type of obsession where she would make it that only she had the right (in her mind) to kill him (like ladd from baccano with his wife) as for the pairing, I have to ask first is this harem or single if the former I only ask that the girl's involved make sense not like say Hiro's mother or leon's cousin unless you can somehow make a situation where it work's, if the later then I have to say that's a tough choice from almost proven canon best girl Kyoko or one of the many other best girl's like Chiaki or Kaede heck many of the girls from the serious are great so in that regard I just have to say be careful in who you pick, and one finally question is Komaru a viable candidate for the pairing's because from the way you had Makoto describe how grateful he was to her I honestly think it could develop into a relationship beyond siblings, plus Toko was spot on about Komaru's brother complex no doubt.

Anyway love the chapter and I hope you update soon.
doremishine itsuko chapter 2 . 1/17/2018
non despair please and I so want makoto be with hinata love both of them and monaca is such a sweetie in your story
SeouLee chapter 1 . 1/17/2018
Goodness... I started following you years ago because of Percy Jackson and honestly haven't been reading fanfiction for a while since then. But I'm ecstatic that you're writing for Danganronpa, as it is currently my latest obsession. Glad to see you're still doing well, and I can't wait to see the next few chapters! Good luck in the new semester :-)
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