Take your time buddy.

Also, why do you refer to Nekomaru by his last name? Like you call him Nidai and yet you call Chihiro, well, Chihiro? I’m confused.

You know reading through this again I just noticed that Mondo referred to Chihiro as “dude” instead of “chick” implying that he knows Chihiro’s secret, just like how he slipped up in game. Such a small thing but man is it a nice touch, unless it was an accident but with how you’ve played Ryoko/Junko (and please if you don’t know that by now it really shouldn’t be a spoiler) like with the mentions of Junko out on the weekend with family the same time Ryoko came to visit, and the sneaky text during their gaming session. There’s always hints but just enough misdirection to keep the connection from being solidified for Makoto, because surely he’d be able to piece it together eventually. Which reminds me that it’d be interesting to see how she eventually decides to reveal that.

Also Makoto’s luck is supposed to be unpredictable to anyone so that plays well into their relationship, and also opens opportunities to create problems because honestly his luck would do that. Pick and choose which other talents you want to mix in and you can create something disastrous. Even if it’s non despair and bormal school life, it’s also Hope’s Peak with tons of talented people and 2 people with insane luck, and with Naegi’s almost always resulting in something bad happening directly to him even if the end results are generally good, well there’s plenty of chaos to be had.

Good luck

Well Junkos screwed the Towa group resources gained through Monaco is kind of how she was able to make the whole world go through despair in the first place good job Naegi without even trying to you have ruined Ultimate Despairs plans.

I like what you have written and if you feel that you need to take a break from the story then that is quite fine.

I'd hate to think you're forcing yourself...

Hey there, I don’t have a lot to say other than I’m loving this so far, there are just 2 things I’d like to mention. The middle of chapter ANs are nice, but the things mentioned, nobody would have noticed anything was wrong if you didn’t mention and the information provided could have been figured out anyway. I’d just suggest in the future having more confidence In the reader, as the middle AN sort of takes us out of the story. Speaking of the story, I’m gonna be honest but the focus on school is kinda taking away from the fic. I don’t know if it’s the same for everyone reading but at least for me, I heard the cool twist on the plots, and wanted to see how that affects how characters interact with each other. When makoto was helping toko between classes is where I had fun reading. When everyone presented I honestly just skipped. I’m hoping we get some pure character interaction in the coming chapters since we’re taking a short break from the school arc. All complaints aside I love your fic, especially the beginning.

its good to know you still like this story

I think it would be a good idea to take a break form the story for a while.

I got to say DualStardust, personally i really enjoy this danganronpa fic you created so far. The way you wrote/flush out character"s personalities was well written to me. I like how your potraying makato naegi origins/story, though for me I"m for him and his red head bae. Overall great fanfiction and truly immersive story

This chapter is so awesome!

I would think that by the arc makes more sense in the long run!

Another good chapter was cool seeing all the projects and groups. And I say unique names, I want to see what you come up with and with new chapters we can try to guess what will happen.

hmm this was pretty good i am glad we have wrapped up the lab arc and are moving onto something new so i look forward to where this goes and what happens

Kiritaka?, Tigami?, Ikusaba Mukuro Ultimate Detective? and depends on the majority

by the arc seems better considering how much of a long term project this will be.