Reviews for The Spider of Peace (NEW) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SYMBIOTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon please, I need more of this amazing fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. I'll be honest. I don't like that she was also injected with spider DNA, because...like...why? She doesn't need it and it feels a bit like Izuku was just robbed to me. IDK why but it just does. And tbh I can't see this ending well... |
![]() ![]() Love it can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im enjoying this story quite alot of reading the old one but im a bit sceptical about how the momo dna thing is gonna turn out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta admit, I'm hooked. Seen a few other fics similar to this but the tend to stick too close to the Spidermanverse as opposed to the MHAverse so I find this to be a refreshing change. I look forward to seeing how the Symbiote affects Momo :D ~Akai |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... I just saw Into the Spiderverse at the theater the other day. A beautifully made film, and probably the best Marvel film to date. You are probably wondering what this has to do with this story, and well... While I was watching the film, I realized that *Izuku is well and truly made to wear the mask; even more so than Peter Parker himself... Anyway, let me cut to the chase. I think you should have a Spiderverse Arc of your own in this story... it would be awesome... |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... I just saw Into the Spiderverse at theater the other day. A beautifully made film, and probably the best Marvel film to date. You are probably wondering what this has to do with this story, and well... While I was watching the film, I realized that well and truly is made to wear the mask; even more so than Peter Parker himself... Anyway, let me cut to the chase. I think you should have a Spiderverse Arc of your own in this story... it would be awesome... |
![]() ![]() Great origin please keep going with it, I’ve seen many my hero academia and spider-man crossovers this one is getting good can’t wait what’s happened to Momo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a quick thought. If what izuku's about to do is illegal, people are going to realize that it was him once he goes to UA simply based off his costume. He'll get in trouble. Has this been thought about? |
![]() ![]() Here's hoping Momo gets powers just like Spider Gwen...well that plus her Creation abilities. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww man. Izuku being a submissive bitch immediately after he finally stands up for himself!? Damn it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok. I don't wanna be a dick. But the execution of this fic, has all the subtlety and nuance of a sledgehammer to the face. The story is just *blunt*. And because of that it makes everything feel hamfisted and rushed. I know you rewrote it to hopefully make it better and avoid previous mistakes but you've only replaced one set of mistakes for another in my opinion. I know the last thing you want to hear is that you'd need to revisit these chapters again, but... ya do. It doesn't require an absolute rework from top to bottom but it does need some serious editing work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck yes I'm so glad this story is still going. It's easily one of my favorite stories. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apparently Spiderman sticks to things by altering their adhesive properties and not just by little spikes or anything physical so apparently he doesn't need that webbing on his shoes. |