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| Cheeky Slytherin Lass chapter 1 . 2/11
So, I'm a sucker for family fics. Especially siblings being friends sort of family fics. So that made this enjoyable from the start.
The start hurt my heart a little bit. I ship Parvati and Lavender so hard, so seeing you break them up. Ouch. It was particularly painful that Lavender insisted it was just a fling, like it didn't mean anything. Seeing Lavender being so cold was different, and just... damn.
I'm a bit torn by the exchange between Padma and Parvati. There seemed to be a lot of character bashing, which is one of my biggest pet peeves in writing, but, at the same time, I know things can be a bit heated when venting to a sibling. So I'm really hoping it was the latter, and that you aren't pro-bashing.
That being said, I do love how gentle Padma was with Parvati. It's clear that she wanted her twin to be happy, and the comfort was definitely there.
Lovely writing yet again. Well done.
| antarcticas chapter 1 . 1/27
lavender brown is a fucking idiot, and she made parvati mad and now i'm pissed. but padma's there so it's alright.
beautiful sister dynamics ahhh. i usually like it when they betray each other, but, well, this is the lighter version of that :)