|Reviews for Class 1-B|
| Earth Dragon Arnighte chapter 7 . 5/12
| creativesm75 chapter 7 . 1/11
| Blazing heart frigid soul chapter 7 . 1/10
That was fun.
| Lionheart261 chapter 7 . 1/9
Alright, done with everything you've posted for now. Few critiques.
For starters, I feel like you've got a solid grasp on everyone's characters for the most part, and the new interactions between Izuku and 1-B are pretty solid thus far. And Kendo x Izuku is a ship that I honestly don't see much of, so I'm curious to see how it goes.
Now, regarding Chapter 2...honestly, the whole situation seemed out of character for the two. Not so much Aizawa-he's always been an unorthodox teacher willing to bend his lesson plan occasionally. But Bakugo attacking Izuku like that is weird, considering that, unless I'm forgetting something, he never attacked him outright, or in such a violent fashion, when he was literally right next to him in canon during that exercise. While I can kind of get Izuku sticking up for him, the suggestion of straight up fighting the teacher is...no. A guy like Izuku would not suggest that, especially with next to no combat experience on his end. I suppose in the end, it doesn't really impact the story that much going forward, but, judging from other reviews, it's definitely left a bad taste in some readers' mouths. Just, look at it as a learning experience in how to improve your storytelling.
Another thing from I think chapter 4-5? Nobody knows about Stain(well, unless you count Volume 2 of the Vigilantes spin off manga) at this point, so just-him being at USJ at all should probably be retconned unless you've got a good explanation for his presence.
Finally, just a personal nitpick, feel free to disregard, but I never understood why people tag ships in their fics. I get that this is filed under "Romance," but outright saying that the "person who lights a different kind of fire in him" or whatever the hell is so-and-so character feels...cheap, almost. Like it cheapens the natural development of the ship and the story because you *know* that some kind of relationship is gonna develop between the two characters-might not stick, but it'll develop nonetheless. As a reader of stories, I can personally tell you that the writing on its own is usually enough to point readers in the right direction, and honestly, they love guessing. It's a mystery, and the fact that it isn't 100% known until the very end keeps them reading and wishing for more. Idk, just a weird thing I've never gotten about these kinds of fics.
All in all, it's got some rough edges, but I see potential here. You can work with this, and you'll only get better with time. Looking forward to seeing more.
...Hopefully at a more regular interval. Don't worry-I know your pain way better than I like to admit, haha.
| Cyde chapter 2 . 1/8
Actually, Katsuki being expelled is what no one would have seen coming... mostly because authors can't seem to bring themselves to actually do it.
| D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 7 . 1/7
keep up the AMAZING WORK!
I Wonder what will happen in CLASS 1-B during the events of the USJ Invasion!
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/7
| Jonas chapter 7 . 1/7
great job on the fanfiction. can't wait to see more.
| Karlos1234ify chapter 7 . 1/7
| General Esdeath chapter 6 . 12/28/2018
What a nice story
| KameFig chapter 6 . 12/1/2018
Yo this is pretty neat my guy.
| Tb chapter 6 . 11/19/2018
Oh my gosh I cant wait for more
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/30/2018
Yessss! Love this deku!
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/17/2018
| blackpackager chapter 6 . 10/13/2018
Made it to 6 and it's bad you tried to patch and stick the whole season mostly you don't even give the idea of time passing between chapter and that's bad cause even the anime does show and mentioned. The passage of time by the time they get their uniform it's been at least a month in the story everyone has and idea of who is who and more importantly it's shown aizawa doesn't like izukus way of using g his quirk here you change him from. The class and in the soam of 6 chapters made him fight bakugo not even the first day is out and the next they they already destroyed the building that very much is the work of bakugo on the fight simulation have u seen the anime ? Have even tried to read the manga ? The ideas are not bad but the way you put them on writting needs Abit more work or someone to have a back and forth on the ideas like a beta it might even help you with the chapter length cause you will have more to write but take the advise or not doesn't matter get someone to run your ideas through they need more background more filling it feels rush and not thought out