Loved bringing Gabrielle over into the world. Powerful too. Great moment.

a good story i hope the author update this

Wtf even is this? Did a dyslexic kid with no knowledge of writing make this story? It reads like a police report and the grammar is god awful.. so confused how this has so many favorites

Just wanted to say love the story even though it looks to be dead. I hope someday you might decide to write some more.

this story was so freaking good, why do all good stories like these end abruptly

we miss you

Nice man. Would love to see you continue the story at some point, but what can you do?

Wish you well

Great story, I really hope you continueit some day. I'm leaving my complete review of the stiry, based entirely in my preferences.
Background 5/5
Development 5/5
Pacing 4/5
Characters 3/5
Writing quality 4/5
Total points 21/25
Rating B
This was overall a great story, one of the best I've read in a while. Usually most decent stories I've read don't event get pass the -C rank. The only issue I found was the characters interaction. You did a great job with most characters but I feel that you dropped the ball with the starks. The children were on point but the adults were not. You didn't get completly their personality.
Thanks you for the great story and good luck with life problems mate.

Just read the entirety of the current story and absolutely loved it. I saw that you last updated two years ago and was wondering what was going on. Hoping you are doing well a faithful reader.

Eu gostaria muito de outro capítulo

You know the eragon books including one called elder anyway what if Harry Potter song The lonely mountain cold to the dwarfs in that world how would they react what would happen since they have no clue out those dwarfs and what if he sung it so beautifully It resonated with the dwarfs of that world and you left a party gift knowledge skill wisdom and the ability to develop the talent to circumvent or understand and or counter someone who's trying to manipulate you and tell them that Odin Loki son might try tripping them into making a hammer war Odin tour son I suggest you give the hammer multiple for ce castor battle modular and forge and adaptus The last one should be allowed the hammer to develop new forms depending on circumstances experiences and what the hammer gets effected by the hammer should also force a Thor to develop his own deep reservoirs of both wisdom and empathy but make sure the empathy has wisdom in it as well to prevent over dosage of empathy. AKA like the original reality version of Charles Xavier of midgard who originally was so empathetic that he decided that everyone is the child and he should take care of his one and white their assets and their cheeks and fight all their battles for them you know what I'm trying to say The recent one is really just trying to control people he has control issues and helicopter parent issues I'm leaving you memories of different things how father is his mother is and son should act especially if they're royalty and you have to have a divide front when you're raising your children how to balance that with your children know their loved but the same time tell them I literally have to put up on a hard face because a****** fall opticians and then it's also despite drones that hidden stuff that then there's also the scrying remember those words and try to tell him to say something similar to that took cuz seriously awesome get him the promise you that around typically soon and a few days a meeting you that if you ever have a adopted son named Loki or off of the Frost James tell them when their a teenager tell them and explained him and detail that you smoke adopted them because you felt responsible for accendently widowing a frost giant mother and you didn't want the child aka Loki The suffer at the consequence and also try to tell him to tell Loki that but he's suffering from PSD from dealing with the frost Giants cuz they were so frustrating to deal with and they did a bunch of horrors that were not part of honorable combat that every single time he looks at Loki he can't help but being pulled back into the moment in the middle of war and you can't help feeling it as if he's there and the after effects kind of bleed through and he's trying to separate that from is daily life with interacting with his adopted son that he loves almost as much as he does his other son of course the only difference is that because I'm not connection on a subconscious magical level but that's it and not only does he experience these flashbacks but he's also experiencing b******* politicians and heavily doses of political intrigue that's weighing him down and a whole bunch of black sleep that's also affecting his judgment that's why he always insists to take a nap before he talks to Loki because he should also explain this to Loki as well so as to not you know make Loki think that he's a monster that you want to manipulate like a weapon.

more chapters my good man!

this story is awesome it has had me cracking up since almost the beginning of it.. hope rl lets u get back to writing because i would love to read more ... but i understand how rl can just drain u