Reviews for Reborn: Into the Wild Westeros
pleasereadme chapter 1 . 11/5/2021
You know the eragon books including one called elder anyway what if Harry Potter song The lonely mountain cold to the dwarfs in that world how would they react what would happen since they have no clue out those dwarfs and what if he sung it so beautifully It resonated with the dwarfs of that world and you left a party gift knowledge skill wisdom and the ability to develop the talent to circumvent or understand and or counter someone who's trying to manipulate you and tell them that Odin Loki son might try tripping them into making a hammer war Odin tour son I suggest you give the hammer multiple for ce castor battle modular and forge and adaptus The last one should be allowed the hammer to develop new forms depending on circumstances experiences and what the hammer gets effected by the hammer should also force a Thor to develop his own deep reservoirs of both wisdom and empathy but make sure the empathy has wisdom in it as well to prevent over dosage of empathy. AKA like the original reality version of Charles Xavier of midgard who originally was so empathetic that he decided that everyone is the child and he should take care of his one and white their assets and their cheeks and fight all their battles for them you know what I'm trying to say The recent one is really just trying to control people he has control issues and helicopter parent issues I'm leaving you memories of different things how father is his mother is and son should act especially if they're royalty and you have to have a divide front when you're raising your children how to balance that with your children know their loved but the same time tell them I literally have to put up on a hard face because a****** fall opticians and then it's also despite drones that hidden stuff that then there's also the scrying remember those words and try to tell him to say something similar to that took cuz seriously awesome get him the promise you that around typically soon and a few days a meeting you that if you ever have a adopted son named Loki or off of the Frost James tell them when their a teenager tell them and explained him and detail that you smoke adopted them because you felt responsible for accendently widowing a frost giant mother and you didn't want the child aka Loki The suffer at the consequence and also try to tell him to tell Loki that but he's suffering from PSD from dealing with the frost Giants cuz they were so frustrating to deal with and they did a bunch of horrors that were not part of honorable combat that every single time he looks at Loki he can't help but being pulled back into the moment in the middle of war and you can't help feeling it as if he's there and the after effects kind of bleed through and he's trying to separate that from is daily life with interacting with his adopted son that he loves almost as much as he does his other son of course the only difference is that because I'm not connection on a subconscious magical level but that's it and not only does he experience these flashbacks but he's also experiencing b******* politicians and heavily doses of political intrigue that's weighing him down and a whole bunch of black sleep that's also affecting his judgment that's why he always insists to take a nap before he talks to Loki because he should also explain this to Loki as well so as to not you know make Loki think that he's a monster that you want to manipulate like a weapon.
dargeam chapter 27 . 10/29/2021
more chapters my good man!
darkpsychoqueen chapter 27 . 10/26/2021
this story is awesome it has had me cracking up since almost the beginning of it.. hope rl lets u get back to writing because i would love to read more ... but i understand how rl can just drain u
killernooch chapter 8 . 10/25/2021
you tend to forget words like a and the also why katanas they are very out of place in this world
killernooch chapter 1 . 10/25/2021
lots of grammar issues
5havidreader chapter 1 . 10/22/2021
I love this story. one of the best I have read.
fire and flam chapter 27 . 10/16/2021
Just wondering if you have plans to continue. Love to see Where your story is going
Guest chapter 11 . 10/15/2021
The only bad thing so far with the story is the katanas
Guest chapter 9 . 10/15/2021
Cringe. Fucking katanas bro are you fucking serious weeb enough as it is
Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2021
Can you get better at writing cause its like you are just explaining shit not really writing a story
Hadrian Stark chapter 27 . 10/12/2021
When is the next update? It has been a long time.
Asdf chapter 27 . 10/11/2021
It is sad that you seemed to have stopped this truly amazing story. I can only hope that one day you will continue it.
SkyDD chapter 1 . 10/11/2021
This is never going to continue is it? Sad about it but thats life I suppose
Fohin692 chapter 27 . 10/10/2021
Hopefully this stay wasn’t abandoned, cuz it was well written and I hope you finish it
Asdf chapter 17 . 10/10/2021
Hope harry is using contraceptive charms.
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