Reviews for Reborn: Into the Wild Westeros
Charanko Pebble chapter 21 . 1/27/2021
Such an awesome story so far!
Aredianx chapter 22 . 1/27/2021
Didn't Aryan already use the story of Unsullied in Qohor to convince the Northern Lords to start their own standing army? Why does he act surprised when Marwyn tells him the same story? This is just sad.
Aredianx chapter 21 . 1/27/2021
Another example of poor writing. For some weird reason you needed Melisandre to be the only priestess around Aryan, so you decided to kill Kinvara in that poor, ridiculous way that makes no sense. Considering Aryan actually saw the warlock throwing something at her and did nothing to stop it. Also, why didn't Aryan check Qaithe's mind to see if she was indeed trustworthy? Aryan had survived many attempts for his life so it's safe to assume he has become a little paranoid. Yet he trusted someone he just met? It's just beyond stupid. This Aryan of yours is a fully-trained wizard with over 4 decades of experience yet he couldn't stop a loyal servant of his from a venom throwing-bald headed freak? What a shitty character.
Aredianx chapter 12 . 1/26/2021
One of the most infuriating things in fanfiction is people claiming that you can't apparate without a wand. Just why? Why would you say something that has no basis just because you are too bad to write a compelling argument how apparating wouldn't work?
Aredianx chapter 6 . 1/26/2021
Do not read if you don't appreciate spelling mistakes and sentences that makes zero sense. There are lots of both. Poor language really makes stories unbearable.
Guest chapter 27 . 1/1/2021
should someone take his suite, in his memory?
Magnus the red chapter 27 . 12/17/2020
This may be dead but I’ll still bookmark it just in case
osiel chapter 27 . 12/17/2020
me encanta la historia continuala
Johnsmythe4059 chapter 27 . 12/15/2020
it's been many months since you've last updated
Venus914 chapter 9 . 12/12/2020
Just because someone is powerful, does it have to be harem?
Venus914 chapter 9 . 12/12/2020
Ewwww. Sansa? that squared-faced bitch?
DevilishPotato chapter 12 . 12/10/2020
wasn't he a master of wandless magic before even as a master of Death he should be able to do wandless magic even though there is no abundance in magic in this world, perhaps that's why? He needs the wand to gather more magic since he can't do it himself? hmmm, questions questions questions
DevilishPotato chapter 12 . 12/10/2020
Yeah! the younger the better I believe!
DevilishPotato chapter 8 . 12/10/2020
WTF is fresh pairing?
DevilishPotato chapter 7 . 12/10/2020
Little finger won't probably bi killed until agter he lied to Cat
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