Not bad but it sucks you killed Ashara off I thought she would have stayed because of her son yes she lost her husband and brother but she still had a child

I will have to read some more chapters to give a better opinion.

I like the chapter.
Update when you can.

Great work so far please whatever you do don’t abandon your work halfway done

Good start for the Story. I hope to read more soon.

I loved 'a new world to conquer' and I've a feeling I'll love this

:-)

Conversations with Death are never interesting and dont bring anything to the story.

Suggestion is to remove it entirely.

Great chapter Update soon

Seems interesting!

Massive wall of text dedicated to Harry's sexual conquests clearly shows what kind of story this is going to be. Not interested, thanks.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Good start

much longer chapter please.

:-) :-) :-)