hello,
it's been 5 years since you've updated, so I just want to say thank you for this story, I hope you'll come back someday.

What a load of bull, a mother of a 4 year old kills herself...

I’m so fucking invested in this story it’s not funny .
Hope you come back to it soon.

Don't tell me your avatar is gonna collect a harem. Cringe. Another let down, should I even continue reading? Is this gonna devolve into chapters upon chapters of a kid writing his desperation? I want the uplift not the comical sex. I'd watch or read a porno, they are better.

"Little Sansa was almost a perfect copy of her mother in manners but he could already see that Sansa would grow up into a very beautiful woman. He wouldn't mind tasting a piece of her once she had grown."

-fcking disgusting this is. You were just talking with Eddard familial-like when you thought this. I know cousins marry in House Stark but she is a kid still. I doubt Harry Potter will do something like this. How this paragraph was structured was disgusting.

Euron greyjoy is who you will bring back i think? He was never confirmed as dead.

For a magical focus why not use a valerian steel ring?

You had stated at the end of a few different chapters that you would never abandon this story, so please come back. Dont be a liar.

Book 1, Sorcerer's Stone: Dudley's gang is chasing him. Harry goes to jump over a garvage bin, i think, and wbadlessly apparates onto the roof. You, as the reader, just doesnt know its apparition until later in the series when apparition is explained.

good god i feared for the harem but it still surprised me with your declaration. gabrielle should have been the the end game. all of these women could have been flings but not actual wives. it's so asinine and doesnt work politically especially for aryan's (god why did you name him such foul names) station as lord and warden of the north

I am truly curious how this story got so many likes and follows. The general storyline is okay for the first few chapters that i read before giving up. All the writing mistakes and simplistic character responses make it absolutely brutal to read certain sections or odd sentences.

This writing is so bad. You need a beta.

Please update

Lol how is a western port to trade with YiTi? What a stupid fic you dont even know the westerois map. They would have to go around dorn... stfu and delete this POS

Bruh, katanas arent meant to fight in a midevial world against armor.