this was amazing. shame it's unfinished

Despite many mispellings and difficult to read sentences this is a really good story.

Please continue.

Set Branden Fully?

I think you mean "Ser Brynden Tully"!

please more

Hola me gusta tu hidtoria

Espero te inspires y continues escribiendo

Saludos desde Lima - Perú

This is amazing. I really wish you had written more. The end of this chapter had me on the edge of my seat. I'm curious as to where she'll be going. Hopefully you'll get back to writing this some more.
LbR

Would be funny if he broke melissandres faith by showing her the actual events of the long night lol it would be so funny .. 'His name was Sirius Black you swine put some respect on his name you bitch'

no one beats Sun Tzu's Art of War

I actually tried so hard to finish this despite the countless spelling and grammatical errors. It started off strong but as I continued to read my interest waned.

This is an amazing story and i would honestly love to read more of it, please keep this up and update again soon.

Im really enjoying this. Light reading at night when getting ready to sleep

Hi, just caught up to this fanfic, it’s great work and i loved it very much, hope you can get back to this to finish this great story.

Are you ever going to update this story?

I honestly dont get why this is so highly rated, Im assuming it has a godlike story buried in all this crappy spelling and grammar, I sadly cant get into a story when im drawn out of it constantly by having to reconstruct a sentence in my head every 10 seconds.

ojala la continues esta muy buena