Man, i like this story a lot, i know you had a lot of real life problems i don't know if u gonna come back to this one after all you went through.

But I'll wait for it

You gotta come back to this either a rewrite or continue really like him essentially being Raven's son

To 'Abel Sephaos' (May 25, 2024): Bless you for that; "RWBY" nowadays feels like a train wreck (especially in its later Seasons/Volumes) that I’m interested in whatever 'miracle' you may be pulling off in the rewrite for this crossover…

To 'ShinSui23' (Jun 4, 2024): Eh, feels less like a traditional Mafia and more like the 'Primo Generation' of the Vongola Family from "Katekyō Hitman Reborn!" (which formed as a vigilante group that existed to protect people), in my opinion…

Phantom thieves turning to a "mafia" sounds cool as hell.

Heads up for new readers: while the story is marked as 'Complete', in reality it isn't (and it's most likely dead)

Realy good story. Can’t wait to read more

Hoping for an update. Love stories that take the time to set up before Canon starts.

I need to see where you put Makoto. I love the idea of all the phantom thieves being this grizzled after what they went through.

Dialogue feels so stiff and robotic on everyone. I can’t anymore. Doesn’t feel natural compared to the 1st chapter.

Considering Yang and Akira are the same age, wouldn’t that rule out Raven as his mother automatically?

I’m putting this out here in case anyone ever comes across this crossover by chance…

So, when it comes to "Persona Series" crossovers, I’ve noticed that I’m more partial to Minato Arisato/Makoto Yuki from "Persona 3" rather than Akira Kurusu/Ren Amamiya from "Persona 5" — the reason being the possible presence of Goro Akechi, a character that I’m not fond of, yet some writers include in their crossovers…

Because of this, the only "Persona 5" crossovers I ever want to read are Abel Sephaos’ "Paradise Lost" and KtyouVsWriting’s "Persona 5: Rulers"… for now. (I don’t know what the problem is, but I can’t seem to enjoy most "Persona Series" crossovers nowadays except a few 'niche' ones… I guess it’s another consequence of time passing us by.)

Although initial critical reception towards Goro Akechi in both the game and the anime was mixed (despite 'ranking high' on official character polls), he was further explored in "Persona 5 Royal", and upon its release, critics found him to be more 'likeable' due to Atlus handling him differently from his original version…

(I will admit that Goro Akechi’s 'Hereward' Persona is rather appealing — how often does anyone see Batman as a badass-looking archer?)

While I loved this fanfic, I am disappointed in your habit of putting INCOMPLETE works under the Completed tag. Sure, it made me stick around till the end but it was a cheap tactic regardless.

Loved this entire story,hope it get updated again; it’d be great to have them all reunited

Persona Crossovers like this one were once a dime a dozen… now, such stories are published (or updated) once in a blue moon.

God, how I miss the old days…