Reviews for Paradise Lost
The Beast of The Cursed Mask chapter 29 . 3/6
Realy good story. Can’t wait to read more
kalakimaki chapter 1 . 3/4
Hoping for an update. Love stories that take the time to set up before Canon starts.

I need to see where you put Makoto. I love the idea of all the phantom thieves being this grizzled after what they went through.
Suyarisss chapter 5 . 1/18
Dialogue feels so stiff and robotic on everyone. I can’t anymore. Doesn’t feel natural compared to the 1st chapter.
TotalWeeb chapter 13 . 10/23/2023
Considering Yang and Akira are the same age, wouldn’t that rule out Raven as his mother automatically?
Kuga Tsuniya chapter 29 . 9/11/2023
I’m putting this out here in case anyone ever comes across this crossover by chance…

So, when it comes to "Persona Series" crossovers, I’ve noticed that I’m more partial to Minato Arisato/Makoto Yuki from "Persona 3" rather than Akira Kurusu/Ren Amamiya from "Persona 5" — the reason being the possible presence of Goro Akechi, a character that I’m not fond of, yet some writers include in their crossovers…

Because of this, the only "Persona 5" crossovers I ever want to read are Abel Sephaos’ "Paradise Lost" and KtyouVsWriting’s "Persona 5: Rulers"… for now. (I don’t know what the problem is, but I can’t seem to enjoy most "Persona Series" crossovers nowadays except a few 'niche' ones… I guess it’s another consequence of time passing us by.)

Although initial critical reception towards Goro Akechi in both the game and the anime was mixed (despite 'ranking high' on official character polls), he was further explored in "Persona 5 Royal", and upon its release, critics found him to be more 'likeable' due to Atlus handling him differently from his original version…

(I will admit that Goro Akechi’s 'Hereward' Persona is rather appealing — how often does anyone see Batman as a badass-looking archer?)
lanceStryker93 chapter 29 . 7/17/2023
While I loved this fanfic, I am disappointed in your habit of putting INCOMPLETE works under the Completed tag. Sure, it made me stick around till the end but it was a cheap tactic regardless.
Zerosdfr chapter 29 . 7/14/2023
Loved this entire story,hope it get updated again; it’d be great to have them all reunited
Suaru Hajime chapter 29 . 6/10/2023
Persona Crossovers like this one were once a dime a dozen… now, such stories are published (or updated) once in a blue moon.

God, how I miss the old days…
denfire2 chapter 29 . 6/8/2023
damn, I wish you would continue with this story.
Man285 chapter 29 . 5/2/2023
I really hope you will update soon.
RaijuTsuiga1126 chapter 29 . 4/19/2023
Dude. It's been four years. Have you abandoned this story?
grimmzapdos chapter 8 . 4/7/2023
I been re-reading the story I wish it would continue
RedMist86025949 chapter 28 . 3/21/2023
Gonna miss this story. I hated the canon for making Raven a deadbeat coward.
Wes Craven chapter 29 . 3/16/2023
Having just read this over the course of a couple of weeks and having thought on it a bit I think this was really good. Definitely exceeded my expectations by quite a bit. The way that Akira was written in this seems a *tad* gratuitous at times but overall quite compelling. A shame this hasn't been continued in so long but I understand losing interest in writing a story, and burnout in general.
shake774 chapter 18 . 3/14/2023
Gongrats you made a interesting character into just another cocky ooc with his head up ass who thinks he knows everything, fucking amazing
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