Reviews for Rise to Justice: New Player
PhantomGoat13 chapter 8 . 2/14
Yikes, really going down hill fast for Khai! Pretty good chapter!
Undeadhero143 chapter 6 . 2/8
Let me be honest with you
While your story is, for the lack of word, average, and good only for time killing if they have nothing else to read, watch or do, it is only that for those who never watched Danny Phantom before
For those who did though, this is what they gonna think
Stupid OC replaced Danny Fenton as Phantom
Other characters are so freaking OOC to the point that you think this is not a fanfic of Danny Phantom, at all
While OOC characters, OCs and Alternate Universes sometimes work, in this case, it clearly did not. At a result, your fic become boring and somewhat annoying to read, so most fan of DP would drop your fic after the first or second chapter, if they really try to be optimistic, maybe they get to the third
But you wrote down the story you have in your mind, that was more than many people did (including me myself). So maybe trying another approach will get you a better fanfic
PhantomGoat13 chapter 4 . 1/25
Nice chapter, very intriguing story idea.