|Reviews for Emmett's Major|
| AyonSage chapter 1 . 11/7/2018
If the story is Emmett/OC why does the pairing read Jasper/OC?
| alirae88 chapter 1 . 5/8/2018
very interesting, please update, can't wait to see where you take this
| Scarlet7249 chapter 3 . 4/17/2018
Very interesting i can't wait to c where this goes
| GawkyTC chapter 1 . 4/17/2018
I am rnjoying the story very much, I would however be able to read and understand it better if there was proper spacing.
| jessa76 chapter 2 . 1/27/2018
| GawkyTC chapter 2 . 1/24/2018
good start, a bit short, looking forward to seeing where this goes. If she has already met everyone or if her story begins before hand. If her story starts where she is meeting everyone as it goes on I would refrain from doing the first chapter with all that info, its almost a form of spoilers, you should work that info into the story.