So Brom allowed his son to be abused? He did nothing for it?

Arya's a bitch. She is literally ready to give up on Eragon because he's a traumatized only really cares about him to end the war, other than that, she doesn't give a fuck.

Arya's a cunt here, NGL.

You do know that Arya herself, in canon, tells Eragon that Faolin wasn't her mate/lover, right?

Honestly I never believed or liked the idea of Arya and Faolin being mates.

Arya is such a bitch here.

Does Saphira not trust Ajihad or Murtagh?

I’m am loving the story. What I love even more than the story is the constant updates.

Good story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

please update the story.

just one thing bugs me: you were not consistent with using ' or " for thoughts and speaking out loud respectively

Love arya x eragon! Please don't make eragon swear fealty to a human! It's just wrong if he was abused by them and it makes more sense if he is loyal to the elves or dragons more. In my opinion that is. Well update soon

Nice chapter, Eragon's backstory is partially revealed at least. :D Keep it up.

(Side note, many people seem to make this mistake: Faolin and Arya were not mates, as confirmed by Paolini. More... courting he said, boyfriend/girlfriend in this day and age. Though for the purposes of fanfiction, etc I guess it's not a major point.)

Awesome job! The fight sequence was nicely done and I like the changes you made to the dialogue and Eragon’s no mercy fighting style. You might want to consider dropping the rating from M to T. There hasn’t been much to justify the mature rating so far and you could always change it back later on.

The concept of Arya being trap Eragon’s mind seems intriguing, but I hope it’s only a taste of the true horrors Eragon faced. Keep the updates coming and until next time:)

Progressing well so far! Keeping Arya in character I believe and 'this' Eragon still acting how someone would do when traumatised by something that has happened in their early childhood. Interesting to see where this goes. :D

The story is progressing very nicely. The only thing I would work on is the conversations between characters. Sometimes it’s difficult to tell when one person stops speaking and the other begins. You might want to and more line breaks or tags when a character responds. Otherwise keep up the great work!