Reviews for Parallel Journey |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to read a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome I like the partnership with Tom Riddle and meeting the new world Potters and Snape however, what I liked the best was the gargoyle. The power he knows not a gargoyle that sleeps under Harry’s bed and is transported dimensionally in his blood. Oh and the part where Harry walks out of the flames… Just WoW |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a truly wonderful fic. Thank you for writing another addition to the best of Harry Potter fanfiction. I followed the fic for some time and tried to review every chapter, but I don't have a good memory and kept forgetting details. So I was forced to wait until it was done. I was so glad it happened. I read it in two nights and enjoyed it greatly. Hopefully we'll see more stories from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() an absolutely amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Well written. Unique. Fresh. The crescendo was in the right spot. Didn’t drag on. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry really is a moron. Like how many times does he get into a fistfight with a dude whose way stronger than him? Ever heard of the killing curse? It works pretty well against jacked up dudes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! Even if I'm certain to read any potential sequel to this story, it's nice to have read one that actually finished. I can't say that I enjoyed every piece equally or that I always found it an enjoyable read, but I can say that I liked far too much to not overlook the relatively minor gripes that I have with it. Kudos |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was an absolute ripper. One of the best! Cheers for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Followed this since the inception. What I can truly say is bravo. You have a way of magic things seem epic, the initial battle with the Gargoyle was written in a way that I have yet to encounter in sheer scale of what is being attempted in my many Hundreds of fanfictions read to fruition. Your weakness comes in your sometimes lack of being succinct. You have a tendency to drag out plot points and make the story a bit heavy at times. While this can be excused by your excellent sense of making Adversity and Scale; how you give the protagonist huge power but likewise scale the opposition in such a way that the story does not get predictable is noteworthy. I would suggest taking a look at the brevity of your stories. All this being said, I would love to read your take on more mundane and lower scale adversarial conflicts; as I do believe your writing would shine there. No matter what, I will read whatever you publish. It will be interesting to see where you venture next and any improvements you do to your writing. Thanks for this wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started reading this storry during December, and have followed it since. I would gladly admit that this is one of the best hp fanfiction I have read, the fights are amazing, you have made harry dark and mature but not edjy I really loved the contrast between two voldemort. Though I would have loved an epic duel between grindelwald and tom but I am satisfied with dolohev's . so yeah nothing much else to say. Good luck for your futurevstories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a great ending, short and to the point. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats on finishing the story. It's really something to be proud of! I've enjoyed it immensely and think you did a great job of tying it all up and ending it with this cool epilogue. I'm looking forward to your future works! |