Reviews for Parallel Journey
Solstice07 chapter 1 . 9/8/2023
Nothingburger chapter 68 . 8/8/2023
Ending it on Hello Tom is probably one of the best endings of any story I've ever read, kudos!
Forsoothandconquest chapter 6 . 8/4/2023
One thing, magical shields block physical objects even more effectively than they block magic. Especially magical objects or objects summoned with magic.
oneizm chapter 50 . 7/16/2023
Jesus goddamn christ. Take a shot everytime Harry gets manipulated, captured, or ambushed and you’ll be dead. He has to be the most passive push over version of this trope I’ve ever read. He’s got power to rival Riddle and instead he runs around like everyone’s minion getting used. Which typically Harry is supposed to really dislike. He also doesnt seem to care much about actually getting home.

He wants to get back home but instead is getting caught up in everyone elses bullshit for no reason. He keeps getting people hurt or killed. He doesn’t make any proactive moves, claiming things aren’t his problem, when they very much obviously are, which constatly bites him in the ass. He’s just not smart. He didn’t even get a magical oath from Riddle to help him when everything’s done, ignoring the fact that he knows Riddle is a heartless manipulator and other people could probably help.

The book itself is very well written technically and Harry is consistent in his stupidity, ao i dont want this to he taken as hatred towards the author. I dislike the character not them. I’m sure others will enjoy this, as they should, it’s just not for me.
Fuck Names chapter 68 . 6/22/2023
Wow. I left this story on Chapter 62 and to date this is the only story that I love that I left. I remember being so sad when I saw the completed tag. That was precisely 440 days ago. Today, I returned from where I left off and finished it. I'm pretty emotional right now tbh.

I love this story more than you could ever fathom. It's literal perfection for me lacking of any flaws bar the ending though that's purely opinion based. I wanted him to kill Voldy and return to that world. Either way, this is by and far the greatest Harry Potter story I've read. I read three fandoms mostly; Pokemon, HP and PJO. Traveler is the GOAT for Pokemon, this is the GOAT for HP and An Impractical Guide to Godhood is the PJO GOAT story.

You have my eternal gratitude for writing this. So much creativeness, amazing battles and literally reinventing magic for me in an understandable way. I loved this so, so much. I dunno if you'll write again but if you do, I'll be there. Till then, adios.
Bart chapter 68 . 6/9/2023
All in all, great story. Its a shame we don't see chapter past that... I hope for sequel, or at least a mini where Harry lives with his family in that other world. He at least deserves as much.
battybiologist chapter 68 . 6/5/2023
Fantastic concept! Some of the action sequences are a bit of a slog (especially the final one) but the world building, dialogue, and characterization are great.
BloodBank chapter 68 . 5/14/2023
What a truly phenomenally told story, with exceptional pacing, characters, twists and turns. I truly cannot thank you enough for putting pen to paper and sharing such a phenomenal story with us. I can only hope you will write more.
theDancer chapter 68 . 4/21/2023
I loved it. Your world made magic feel like magic. That veela terminator was one of the coolest things I've ever read about in this fandom. Thank you for sharing this story with us
hallaba chapter 68 . 3/3/2023
Very good ending.
Alfae chapter 68 . 2/28/2023
Perfect epilogue.
Alfae chapter 56 . 2/26/2023
Loving this fic but it's like Harry turned his brain off for that metamorph fight, rolled my eyes a bit.

Other than that, this fic just gets better and better. Can't wait to see how it ends.
Alfae chapter 25 . 2/26/2023

these chapters have been CRAZY.

I need to stop myself from pulling an all-nighter and reading this all in one go.
Alfae chapter 19 . 2/26/2023
I love the use of Obliviate here! Such a great scene.
GoneForever212 chapter 68 . 2/15/2023
Thank you for the great read!
I loved the ending and all the open questions- how did Harry get back, will he be able to return, how quickly did he kill Voldemort
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