Reviews for Parallel Journey |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus goddamn christ. Take a shot everytime Harry gets manipulated, captured, or ambushed and you’ll be dead. He has to be the most passive push over version of this trope I’ve ever read. He’s got power to rival Riddle and instead he runs around like everyone’s minion getting used. Which typically Harry is supposed to really dislike. He also doesnt seem to care much about actually getting home. He wants to get back home but instead is getting caught up in everyone elses bullshit for no reason. He keeps getting people hurt or killed. He doesn’t make any proactive moves, claiming things aren’t his problem, when they very much obviously are, which constatly bites him in the ass. He’s just not smart. He didn’t even get a magical oath from Riddle to help him when everything’s done, ignoring the fact that he knows Riddle is a heartless manipulator and other people could probably help. The book itself is very well written technically and Harry is consistent in his stupidity, ao i dont want this to he taken as hatred towards the author. I dislike the character not them. I’m sure others will enjoy this, as they should, it’s just not for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I left this story on Chapter 62 and to date this is the only story that I love that I left. I remember being so sad when I saw the completed tag. That was precisely 440 days ago. Today, I returned from where I left off and finished it. I'm pretty emotional right now tbh. I love this story more than you could ever fathom. It's literal perfection for me lacking of any flaws bar the ending though that's purely opinion based. I wanted him to kill Voldy and return to that world. Either way, this is by and far the greatest Harry Potter story I've read. I read three fandoms mostly; Pokemon, HP and PJO. Traveler is the GOAT for Pokemon, this is the GOAT for HP and An Impractical Guide to Godhood is the PJO GOAT story. You have my eternal gratitude for writing this. So much creativeness, amazing battles and literally reinventing magic for me in an understandable way. I loved this so, so much. I dunno if you'll write again but if you do, I'll be there. Till then, adios. |
![]() ![]() All in all, great story. Its a shame we don't see chapter past that... I hope for sequel, or at least a mini where Harry lives with his family in that other world. He at least deserves as much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic concept! Some of the action sequences are a bit of a slog (especially the final one) but the world building, dialogue, and characterization are great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a truly phenomenally told story, with exceptional pacing, characters, twists and turns. I truly cannot thank you enough for putting pen to paper and sharing such a phenomenal story with us. I can only hope you will write more. |
![]() ![]() I loved it. Your world made magic feel like magic. That veela terminator was one of the coolest things I've ever read about in this fandom. Thank you for sharing this story with us |
![]() ![]() Very good ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this fic but it's like Harry turned his brain off for that metamorph fight, rolled my eyes a bit. Other than that, this fic just gets better and better. Can't wait to see how it ends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NAHHHH these chapters have been CRAZY. I need to stop myself from pulling an all-nighter and reading this all in one go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the use of Obliviate here! Such a great scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the great read! I loved the ending and all the open questions- how did Harry get back, will he be able to return, how quickly did he kill Voldemort |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't generally post reviews for fanfics. I've read a lot (I mean, a lot) of HP fanfiction over the years. And I cannot believe that I missed this one. I usually filter my search based on the favourites/reviews count, which has kept me from a masterpiece like this. This is a phenomenal work. I will not claim that there's no error and the narrative is flawless. But your world building, fight scenes and sheer scope of the story is mind-boggling. I extend my sincerest gratitude for sharing this with us. Keep writing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dam, this story is good! One of, if not THE best dimension travel based stories I've ever read. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this, can't wait for more fics from you. I love how you struck a good balance - gritty and dark, but not unnecessarily over-the-top edgy. Can't believe this isn't more popular, honestly. |