|Reviews for fear me forevermore|
| thoughts-of-joy-dreams-of-love chapter 1 . 1/29
This is great! I think you've really captured Tom's obsessiveness, narcissism, and pure ambition. His desperation to recreate himself as something more worthy is both a little sad and, since we know just how close he'll come to achieving his goals, terrifying. Awesome job :)
| antarcticas chapter 1 . 1/27
i think tom as the psychopathic mastermind rather than the insane megalomaniac is an important difference to have when writing a tom fic. you've mastered the first personality, though. he's very crazy but still very sane, and he's messed up. and that's perfect.
| LucyLuna chapter 1 . 1/25
I thought this was pretty interesting. I like how you show Tom's notions of grandeur in how he thinks of himself as worthy and dreams of being a god. You also do well in showing his cleverness with how he figures out where the entrance to the chambers is from just a little hint in the book he was reading.
| ipsa dixit chapter 1 . 1/22
tom *clap* riddle *clap* will *clap* become *clap* a *clap* god
ahhhhh i love this, vic :')
| falling winter roses chapter 1 . 1/21
amazing! well written, i loved how you used repitition. It really added to this. Loved it!