Reviews for A Godfather's Promise
PLEASE READ chapter 23 . 4/15
I ask that you please update heir to the sage as it is one of my favorite stories I also suggest that in order for susan storm to start having feeling for Naruto when he uses his seals to allow the thing to turn to Ben grim and back at will
szlekane chapter 18 . 4/13
I can't help but admire how he restrains himself(Potter) from shagging such submissive woman.
Lim Howsen chapter 23 . 4/13
such a cliffhanger! wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Olbid chapter 1 . 4/11
THE BLACK'S RESURGENCE influence in the fandom attacks again.
Noy chapter 23 . 4/10
Cygnus Greengrass is a complete scumbag.
What kind of filth try to blackmail someone he knows is innocent just to increase his family prestige and statut ? People like him disgust me, and I think less of Harry for agreeing to make a "deal" with him, if I was Fleur I would probably leave him because of it. As for Daphne, who would want to know that the only reason she is getting a husband is because her father wanted some properties from her future husband and because said husband needed her father to get out of jail ? Good luck building a healthy relationship with this kind of fondations !
TheFlowerOfTheCourt chapter 19 . 4/7
So much for all of that “training” Harry supposedly did with Sirius. Every time I see Harry in a do or die situation, and then magically the only spells he know are Stupify and Expelliarmus, I immediately start hoping he dies. What’s the point in creating a bunch of fake training if Harry is just going to do the same crap he did in canon...
SherlockHolmes4884 chapter 23 . 4/6
Mr green grass needs to understand that an abundance of counselors you will win the war.
bailhunter chapter 23 . 4/1
What a great story. I I hope Fleur won't be too angry with harry though.
montanoaries9 chapter 23 . 3/25
why did you make him a wimp again
Musicscarecrow chapter 23 . 3/25
Please please please update soon! I love this story! You rock!
FicTIuNFaN chapter 23 . 3/24
Hope to hear more from you soon
Mana's Cinder chapter 23 . 3/19
I don't think this chapter was very well played. Harry is supposed to be a dominant. He's supposed to be in control. Yet, you have Harry being forced into a marriage with one or two of his would-be subs because he's too weak to control his own fate. It feels very forced because it is.

Harry has been very unimpressive, which is disappointing after all the talk about making his family proud and how talented he is. How his family is supposed to be conquerors who never bend or break. Harry was conquered in this chapter.

It also was awkward and silly just how obviously Cygnus controlled the entire trial. Can you be more obvious that having the guy presiding over the trial constantly looking at Cygnus for approval and orders like a puppy?

I suppose you could say that I'm very disappointed in this chapter.
Archleone chapter 23 . 3/19
Man, Harry is a complete rug in this chapter. So much for being "the dragon". He's nothing.
Archleone chapter 21 . 3/19
For a while there, I misunderstood and thought this woman was Hermione's actual sister and she was into some crazy incest that probably started when she was super underaged. Would've been quite the twist, veering into some really dark territory for poor old Hermione and her family.
Archleone chapter 18 . 3/19
I'm getting a bit fatigued of all the latex. I don't really find latex to be sexy. I'm also somewhat allergic to it, which doesn't help matters.

I don't really like that Fleur is dressing Luna up in latex now too, since she's been obsessed with latex to the point of excess so far on her own. Luna could have gone for something a little different.

I'm also a bit bored of the improbably lesbian/whatever relationship between Susan and Daphne. It's improbable because it kind of came out of nowhere. "The guy we both like is with someone else. Oh well. The consolation prize is us fucking each other instead!" I don't think Daphne was ever hinted at being bisexual before that night either, so it just seemed very abrupt. And it's just not very interesting. Maybe it's just me, but I've never found lesbian porn particularly entertaining. And none of it has really been leading them towards Harry, so it's extra boring.

Hermione coming up with a perverted peeping spell is amusing. She seems the type. She's always been very nosy. Peeking at some unexpected shibari probably just changed her whole life
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